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Old 03-21-05, 09:42 PM   #1
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Dabatos vs Parallel

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Topic: Pen on Paper
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Old 03-21-05, 09:44 PM   #2
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Old 03-21-05, 09:44 PM   #3
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Old 03-22-05, 07:21 PM   #4
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Pen On Paper
Everyday and every night I spend my day Writing
Instead of fighting, I’m smart I use my time Wisely
Pen on the paper constantly, trying to be a Emcee
Studying lyrics, I don’t care if others don’t Agree
Listening to smooth beats with my Pen on the Paper
Daily unleash the wrath, You know I’m like a Vapour
Everyday I would learn, always getting much Better
Always writing love poems and emotional Letters
I only write those of my family and all around Me
I cherish the moment, even if I’m to be on one Knee

Apparently, I’ve noticed much improvement in my Skill
I’m a lot more consistent, winning battles for Thrill
With my pen on paper, I hit more then normal Elevation
But it took me time, sometimes I needed some Relaxation
As time past I got much better with my Collaborations
With my pen writing non stop, I had the Determination
I’m on the mission, yet I feel like I’m going to Succeed
Even if no else Agrees, I will proceed and begin to Exceed
A lot of people misjudged me, I guess they were Wrong
I guess they had no clue I’d be surprising in a Song..
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