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03-17-05, 05:40 PM
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Tight.
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Outcast.....
IP:
Walking down the streets, beaten, bloody and bruised
What happened, just now, how did I just get fooled…. WHY did they take advantage of me, to make me feel … make me feel like shit, so they could prove they were real… Rambling along a street, by myself, no others with me It’s raining solid, at least my tears are covered So no one can see how badly I’m impaired, my heart flees For so long, my fucking emotions were tethered.. Someone bit into my flesh, and tore around with they teeth I’m wearing four layers, yet I’ve been arctic forever No, I can see through everyone, resembling a colossal glass sheet People believing the infomercials, creating something completely fictional, left in the abyss, they’re minds stalling Conform if you will, who cares, when you have a stolen Identity The medias skill, taking lives of the innocent, fucking brainwashing But look what happens, I haven’t talk to god in so long You become someone who is unknown to society The Goths are hated, the punks claim to be full of complexity Are they though? If you don’t do right, it’s automatically wrong.. Undeniable problems arise from the simplest of things I wish I could fly, but I’d be called a freak with wings To soar above the problems that someone like me faces Having more than one style of living, tied up in a knot, like shoe laces Refusal to swing just one way, not homosexually, but mentally My mind is open to more than just one thought, especially Those of the children who speak in tongues, but the same language don’t you get it you fools, were all different but we hold the same baggage God’s light is spreading through the different to show our proud pasts That’s why I am proud to stand out, and be Jesus’ Outcast. |
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03-17-05, 05:58 PM
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Tight.
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IP:
Left feedback on: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2030371
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03-17-05, 06:31 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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dam son this was fire right here. The emotion of this was jus amazing. You were consistency was obvious. I mean dam did you fall off track once ? Definately not, probably one of the best open mics out right now. And you speak the truth.
overall: 10/10 no less check out my open mic coming soon called Think its gonna be dope
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03-18-05, 03:52 PM
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Given Light
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^Thanks flow I appreciate it.
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03-19-05, 08:48 PM
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Tight.
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word at this being uppped.
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