Lil Sum Sum....
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Yo a mind can only be,
a sign from ole lord G,
he has a metaphore for me,
a life is a web,
witch are secrets that are kept,
inside a bottle full of neglect,
Before this has been said,
He must breath life into a lung,
untill its time is up,
so feel me as i teach,
these words of unspoken speech,
and learn from unbroken deeds,
watch from stolen seats,
as a heart like mine bleeds,
down to Jesus's feet,
and i cop a plea,
sign on the dotted line for "free",
but in realiTY,
we sell our sole to the grim,
fore in the mind of him,
we have sinned yet again,
and fail to repent.
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A mind is a complex thing,
but when you learn to controle it,
for one moment you will see,
what was unable to be seen,
the air you breath.
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yo a heart beat can be,
so many different things,
to me its a fresh beat,
that begs to be free,
and that it is,
untill it ends,
for me,
fore i have seen the dark side,
within a man,
ive almost killed a man,
and i beg to Lord to forgve,
fore i dont know what i did,
saw my friend havin an attack again,
and im next how long will i live,
cause of how bad ive sinned,
but hold up now wait,
YOU sit down and contomplate,
that there will be a day,
when the lord might say,
the price that you will pay,
sets YOU negative no chance for bail,
theres no innocent in this jail,
Eternity in a cell,
as the devel will yell,
Welcome To Hell.
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A mind is a complex thing,
but when you learn to controle it,
for one moment you will see,
what was unable to be seen,
the air you breath.
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aight theres a shit load of metaphores in this one........ENJOY!......Peayces

wow man, this is very well written, and you said so much, even if the vocabulary wasnt complex,the idea was, your words fit perfect and you projected your point across well, nice use of metaphors and emotion showed well here. keep dropping pieces like this..1

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