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03-19-05, 03:03 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Can't Go On Without You ft. Now A Days
IP: 5043 32F4
Can't Go On Without You Because.. You really touched me, from my brain to my Heart I told you apart from any girl cause your Better.. Your in my heart, that’s how its gonna be Forever I cant go on, your more soft then a Pillows Feather.. Now A Days My Life My Nigh My Future Wife, I Can't Go On Without Your Voice Sensitively Clumsy, Yet With Me You've Made The Best Choice I'll Give It All Up Girl, My Career, My Selling, And Forget My Boys We Had Problems Here And There, And We Didn't Face The Noise But Now I Know I Can't Go On Without You By My Side Baby Girl Coz From Day One I Was In Love, And Completed You As My World I Remember How We Use To Sit Out At Night Watching Clouds Swirl Ya Worth Every Breath,For You I'd Swim To The Sea With Every Pearl Forgive Me, But Ahh Your Love I Can't Let It Slip Through Me My Cutie Your Calm Gentle Touch When I'm Explosive& Angry Just Soothes Me Because.. You really touched me, from my brain to my Heart I told you apart from any girl cause your Better.. Your in my heart, that’s how its gonna be Forever I cant go on, your more soft then a Pillows Feather.. Parallel The first time I met you, I could see tons of Surprises I thought you were prettier then when the Sunrises I kind of felt jealous cause of who you were With But you drew me in as if you were a sexy lock Smith Eventually I thought, you’d be mine soon or Later I wanted our emotions, to only get even more Greater You inspired me, you’re the first girl I’ve ever Loved Your skin was is as smooth as a feather of a Dove The bounce of ya style flared like the northern Lights Everyday I with you, I cherished at a higher Height Me and you, I know we work out, we were meant to Be By the time you see this I just hope you really like It... Because.. You really touched me, from my brain to my Heart I told you apart from any girl cause your Better.. Your in my heart, that’s how its gonna be Forever I cant go on, your more soft then a Pillows Feather.. Now A Days Girl My Live Is Worthless If Your Not The Girl On My Side I Knew You Was The One, How You Said Ya Down To Ride But I'd Never Sacrifice That Girl I Want To Protect You Babe Like You've Came Along, And My Life You Could Of Saved I Realized When, I Love You And I Looked Into Ya Eyes And I Saw Deep Down You Were More Beautiful Then The Horizon I Send My Kisses To You, Nightly Calls, I Know You Feel It So I've Came To A Conclusion,......This Relationship Seal It Come Over And Let Me Rub Your Body Down Gently And Lovely Girl You've Witnessed My Love, All You Got To Do Is Love Me Because.. You really touched me, from my brain to my Heart I told you apart from any girl cause your Better.. Your in my heart, that’s how its gonna be Forever I cant go on, your more soft then a Pillows Feather.. |
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03-19-05, 03:08 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
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03-19-05, 03:24 AM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Dope Ey! Bump Let's Crack This Off
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03-19-05, 06:19 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: F396 2771
Okay, concept isn't original but to be honest, any girl would like a guy to write stuff like this for her so whoever was on your mind, she one lucky girl...
I feel you both came equally good on this one, had a lot of strong and pure emotion in there and the way you worded it was nice as well. It wasn't too mushy in fact, you had some imagery in there but strongest was emotion, no doubt about that. The chorus was good, I liked it and the seperate verse were real good as well. Kept me focussed throughout the whole piece which is an accomplishment already hehe...It's nothing too original maybe but you can see it's the real stuff and I just love reading that Keep it up! DQ
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03-19-05, 12:58 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot for the feed drama. thanks for liking my hook first time somin said that about my hooks. uppin
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03-19-05, 03:17 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
pretty hot
i liked dis |
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03-19-05, 06:10 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Thank You I Guess, Lol Upping This Here Fo Sho!
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03-20-05, 07:38 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
yeah this was a good drop 4 both of y'all i must say.......vocab was nice...structure was on point...meta's were there...multi's were hitting...& overall i would say it'z 10/10 good work both of ya keep doing ur thang
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03-22-05, 05:42 PM
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...Untouchable...
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Wow!!
Weerd Whoa! |
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