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Old 03-15-05, 11:24 AM   #1
Lil C
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Last Night

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Last night
I sat down thinking what is the best thing in my life,
and all the thousand of things that came up all revolved around you.

I don't have much and maybe never will, but you are my most prized
possession. All things that make up whole you completely engulf me with
such happiness.

I see all that is beautiful in you. Everything about being here right now
takes a different meaning because you exist.

You gave the possibility of dreaming.
Implanted within me the desire, the inspiration of believing.

Freedom of being me. Longing to be better.
In this crazy world not being so afraid, or so alone.

All the difference you make in my world,
I wish I could give you more, but all I have to give you is my heart.

You are a reality of who I am and a revelation of what to become.

Knowing that when I close my eyes I awaken to your beautiful face, that
when the day is over I return to you soothes
the very depth of my soul (of my being).

With open arms I accept the challenge of what life is
because of all that you are and all that you mean.
Your The reason My soul cries with glee...

I dedicate my life to you. Wanting nothing in return. Solely that you stay
within my heart forever..
I Love You Tyrese ,
........Love Mommy
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Old 03-16-05, 09:29 AM   #2
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This was such a beautiful piece. The emotion came through so strong and yet so pure, so raw. You really managed to express the deeper love you have for your baby boy and I loved the way you worded everything. So simple and yet with so much meaning, with such a message in your words. You really pictured the band between child and mother, the unconditional love you have for him and the dedication. I enjoyed reading this piece, keep on dropping girl!

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Old 03-23-05, 10:24 AM   #3
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thanx fo da feed DQ really appreciated, uppin dis.
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