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Old 03-30-05, 07:31 PM   #1
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2059722

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183209

them two i posted feed on


iite...www.soundclick.com/davine

name "Davine & Evident - Always Coming Back Home To You"
somethin lik that.. hah

if it aint against no forum rules; u can leave links if u want n i'll return the favor... peace
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Old 03-30-05, 07:39 PM   #2
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this was a good peice, the singing at the end wasnt to bad, its pretty good. alot of your peices are good, i look up to seeing more from you. word
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Old 03-30-05, 08:13 PM   #3
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1rst One-Ya flow was cool...you rode the beat good.....you fell off on some spots...
2nd Person-Ok.....ya voice is kidna weird
3rd Person-Good Flow...lyrics were good...and ya voice was good....

Overall this is a ok song....nun too special...this was cool.....i know i coulda seen better from ya'll but straight drop...~1
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Old 03-30-05, 08:58 PM   #4
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word; there was only 2 ppl on there tho? lmao u prolly peeped the wrong song....


it went me; evident; me; evident, me (singin) so i dunno wat one u peeped...
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Old 03-30-05, 09:31 PM   #5
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*listening*

1st guy-decent...liked the voice...

2nd guy- honestly i dont like your voice...flow was ok....

1st guy again-....seemed like in some spots your flow was just a little bit off....nothin too big though.....lyrics was nice...

2nd guy again- your lyrics arent too great man...sorry...flow still decent....

singing- this was my fav. part of the song...pretty nice right here...

overall i enjoyed listening...it was a decent track here....
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Old 03-30-05, 09:59 PM   #6
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meh, i dont think evidents voice flows all that smoothly at time.....but, it wasn't bad, good mixture of voices, nice lyrics, good feeling song.....you got a fresh voice davine....word, and the singing in the hook was pretty good too, keep droppin man
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