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03-30-05, 08:30 PM | #1 | |||
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Sole Survivor: Part 1. The fog of war
IP: 3CAE 6243
Sole Survivor
Part 1. The fog of war We held our post, armed and ready Breathing heavy, I kept my rifle steady “Hold your fire! Wait for it!” the captain would shout But I looked at my comrades’ eyes and saw the doubt I heard a familiar noise, but kept my poise It was as I had feared, the demons voice It carried over the hill and became visible, thousands of beasts Approaching from the east, the wind howled with the voice of the deceased It seemed they all scowled at me, and then let out a shriek Drew their arms, and then began to stampede They came from all directions, we were outnumbered by plenty I stared upon a vast field of monsters, we were surrounded by many This would challenge our best and put our courage to test As we were much less, I was nervous, as were the rest “Load your guns” the captain demanded No other options, for we were stranded “Ready!…… Aim!…” I tilted my rifle higher Then the captain yelled the words that start war, “Fire!” Our bullets penetrated their shields and struck them down Lifeless bodies lay limp and motionless on the ground More fell as I thought, what are they, fallen angels from hell, sent by the devil himself? Or cursed men, condemned by God, to punish their sins, or greed of wealth? But there was no time to dwell, as they charged at an increasingly fast pace They gained speed as their army pressed forward with haste They came closer, now only about one hundred yards away Soldiers with clenched hands, they pray, while others cower and run astray The demons ready to make us suffer their wraith The captain attempted to reassure us, “Don’t give up! Have faith!” They were in a flurry of rage, half their army dead, but reinforcements arrived from the west The captain still barking orders, an axe flew by my head, and struck him in the chest This was a major turn of events As now we had no form of consent I realized, this was our demise And couldn’t help but just question why The creatures came closer, their voices now, in a louder tone Will I be put to my rest? Or will my spirit roam? I closed my eyes, and hummed a tune that I would sing for my baby at home Then images appeared of him all grown up, crying at my gravestone No! I opened my eyes, drew my sword, “This is our last chance! I yelled to the men “Let this be our last stand!” I rose up my arm “We’ll carry the fight!” “Let’s drive the evil demons out of site!” Inspiring words, as they took out their swords We let out a warriors cry as we charged at the hordes They switched from attack to defense, forming a wall But we continued forward “Let’s give it our all!” “Today we are merely soldiers, but tomorrow, we are heroes!” Were the words that I said Then uttered, “Eat cold steal!” As I began to smite the creatures head I dropped ten, looked around for my men, but couldn’t find the rest And then realized they were all dead, I was the last of our men left One to ten thousand, the odds were against me I felt weak, then dropped to my knees I apologized, yelled out, “I’m sorry, I tried!” then started to cry A demon approached me, I let out a sigh, “My love, I bid you goodbye” Part 2. coming soon |
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03-30-05, 08:33 PM | #2 | |||
Get Stomped.
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IP: 1359 748A
dope drop fam nice structure flow rymes
everything hit off good here bro 9/10 keep it up fam
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03-30-05, 08:37 PM | #3 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 54AA 21AD
yeah what he said...dopeness...but aint a OM to me...unless u look at it anotha way...idk...im confused now
-DB
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03-30-05, 08:39 PM | #4 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
word to the word, yo... keep good feed coming, i'll return the fav. soon
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03-30-05, 09:03 PM | #5 | |||
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03-30-05, 09:25 PM | #6 | ||||
Simply Dope
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IP: F73C 5E7B
pretty dope shit... i liked it... nice flow and imagery... 8/10`
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03-30-05, 10:38 PM | #7 | |||
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IP: 3CAE 6243
yoyo flow.... lol this is headgames yo!!!
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03-31-05, 09:42 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 3CAE 6243
part. 2 coming soon......
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04-01-05, 07:08 PM | #9 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
............. now keep giving me feed you hoes
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04-01-05, 07:11 PM | #10 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: CBD1 4982
nice flow here rhymes were tight good structre and all that shit 8/10
please return the favor in my open mic general link in my sig
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04-01-05, 07:41 PM | #11 | ||||
R.I.P
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IP: 3CAE 6243
nice stuff, dope ass drop here
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04-01-05, 07:46 PM | #12 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 9F60 3F54
nice imagry & shit... dman... best rtf read ever... lol.... 8/10... keep it ol' schoo' pimpin' yo... (<-no idea why I just said that)
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04-01-05, 08:47 PM | #13 | |||
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IP: 3CAE 6243
Ummm, I cant return the favor to you village pimp, lol there is nothing to return on in your sig...
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04-03-05, 07:44 PM | #14 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
up again bitches, i return the favor
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04-05-05, 07:47 PM | #15 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
more feed, don't sleep kiddies
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