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05-30-05, 04:20 PM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

H-N-I-C vs artÃ-stica~Mente

IP: EC59 A4F0

Battle Rules:

20-30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Topical battle- child out of wedlock

G-luck

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 04:20 PM

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06-02-05, 06:12 PM

System

Guest

Posts: n/a

IP: 7BE2 A0A1

H-N-I-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 06:12 PM.

06-02-05, 10:34 PM

System

Guest

Posts: n/a

IP: C4D2 8E7E

artÃ-stica~Mente has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 10:34 PM.

06-02-05, 10:45 PM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: C4D2 8E7E

MOM-PLAIN Font
DAUGHTER- RED

As I cuddle in the corner with tears dripping and fear shivering in me
Hiding in the darkness, hoping in my mind, that the monster wont find thee
The monster who created these scars and these tears thatâ€™s leaking
The monster who trapped me in the abyss, and "i hate you" is what he be saying
There's no escape so what's the use? My life will end here sooner or later
While i tremble and wait for my fate to come, my death, the grim reaper
I jerk up, my spine is crawling with nervousness as the door knob turns
Thinking in my head, here he comes, with the anger that's ready to be unleash
.....................................O my god if can already feel the whip on my back burn
I grasp my head so tight, that I felt my nails going into my brain. my lips quiver
Rocking back and forth, holding my knee's so tight grasping for my life
.................................................. ..........................I only wish it'll disappear

As I open the door knob.Without knowing, the tears coursed down my cheeks
I looked inside the room, it was so dark. I flicked the lights shock of what I see
She sits there cuddling in the corner, trying to avoid me, more like hiding
I walked up close, my expectation grew sad as I saw the scar on her....shining
The blood leaked from her face, the ribs showing that she hasn't eaten for days
I knew I regret this, by not looking between the "she deserve it" catch phrase
I reach out her hand, and her skin felt prune, her finger skin was wrinkle by the blood
With carefulness I grew as she stood. I fell on my knee's, and I hugged her as much strength I could
It was like the ocean has been cleaned, like our life was dipped in Clorox, all bright and new
With an smile on my face. The sun shined above us, we've went through the darkness
.................................................. ...And now both of our feetâ€™s touching the grass dew

As i smell the free non-populated air, I'm free, free from the abyss
The scars will heal. My tears are dry, and the whips will be perish
Finally getting myself and my daughter out of that house of hell
With a divorce papers in my hand, i knew everything in
.................................................. ........................near future will go well
God forgave me, for myself being so blind for not seeing the scheme
The words behind this mans vocals, hypnotize by his way of things
My life changed forever once i got in that car, and drove off with my mom
With my window down, sun shining, the branches on the tree's staying strong
I felt the uneasinessâ€˜, the ache in my stomach, as the nervousnessâ€™ crept
While i saw him in a police car, his face, o thy horrible face I will never forget

G-luck!

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06-05-05, 09:01 PM

H-N-I-C

Light Weight

IP: 3240 794D

Born of unwed parents...an unholy conception
But as times pass by people change their perceptions
We show affection in many ways when we have a connection
Bore a child outta wedlock cuz they used no provalactic protection
An act of indiscretion brought me into this world of sin
Weak flesh fought hard, but finally it gave in

Now I'm a living, breathing being, with a life of complications
Mom and dad constantly have a million and one confrontations
"You knock me up and don't have the decency to marry me?"
Then she'll go on and on about the nine months she carried me
"Not again today woman! I just wanna spend some time wit my son"
"KEITH!...LET'S GO!"..."Ok dad here I come"
Week in and week out it's always tha same thing
Fights fussin and cussin all because of a fling
They try and spoil me wit green but I just want some attention
They couldn't buy my love with all tha money in their pensions
So caught up in their vendetta's they forget about me
Mom so stuck on hatin dad that she forgets about Keith

Verbal and mental abuse carried on for years
Asked her about it one day and she broke out in tears
"Everytime I look at you I see your father's face
and think back on that night and that crucial mistake"
"I thought if I had you he'd marry me...I tried to believe"
But oh what a tangled web we weave...when we conspire to conceive
This is just tha story of a child whose family never came to be
I'm an individual, but not so different u see
Cuz there's a million other kids who've lived tha same life as me

06-05-05, 09:05 PM

H-N-I-C

Light Weight

IP: 3240 794D

Nice drop man...deep shit...G'luck...uppin for some votes................

06-05-05, 10:38 PM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 3C99 30A0

O shit you dropped already.................Alright uppin this...........

06-06-05, 06:42 AM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 568C C721

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06-06-05, 03:45 PM

H-N-I-C

Light Weight

IP: 28AD 5545

Let's get some votes dropped...............................

06-06-05, 05:50 PM

#10

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 9BDC 23B3

^^ Word to that.................uppin for some votes.............

06-06-05, 09:47 PM

#11

H-N-I-C

Light Weight

IP: 0825 899A

uppin for votes....................................

06-06-05, 11:29 PM

#12

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 6B56 B2EB

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06-07-05, 02:34 PM

#13

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 6F1B DF6B

Uppin for some damn votes holla..........................

06-07-05, 03:48 PM

#14

H-N-I-C

Light Weight

IP: 28AD 5545

C'mon............................................. ..........

06-08-05, 08:42 AM

#15

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

IP: 3CCD A32C

^^ Word.................UPPIN FOR SOME DAMN VOTES YOU BLUBBER BUTTS!

View Poll Results: H-N-I-C vs artÃ-stica~Mente
H-N-I-C	0	0%
artÃ-stica~Mente	5	100.00%
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