yo, my grandfather (moms side) just died like a hour n 7 minuits ago. R.I.P. mayn. so ima just do a quick keystyle fo him rite now. and ima just keep it simple az fuck, no mulites, just 1 sylible shit. aight, check it...

7 pm, april 8th, tha phone rang, my dad answered
then he came n told me that homeboy finally died frum cancer
now im sittin writtin this, my whole bodys feelin weird
tryna write this shit, tryna fight back tha tears
i dont really know wut 2 say except, i luv u, rest in peace
now all of my grandparents except my dads dad r deceased
now u can b wif ur wife, u 2 chillin up in heaven
ur funeral will b this week, its gon b tha 1st time that im dressin
up, at my grandmuthaz funeral i wore a hoody and sum track pants
but my mom bought me sum cheap dress up clothes, a black shirt and black pants
i knew id have 2 wear them soon, but not this soona tho
its gonna b really sad this week at ya funeral
my little cuzzins cryin, shit, i mite even cry
i'll try n hold it back, but sum1 i luv just died
not sure how old u r, but i hope u had a fun ass life
now its ova, ur in heaven wif ur son and wife
4 all i know u could b sayin "colby, im above u"
just remember, no matta wut home boy i luv u

yeah, sum quick shit, shitty flow n structure i know. just how im feelin n shit. R.I.P. Loury Reignhardt (man, i dont even know how 2 spell ur name right ) look out fo my grandfather Eazy. R.I.P. 2 all my ded peoples, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

almost fogot

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...52&page=3&pp=15

werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

deep shit mayne, i feel wat ya sayin and although it wasnt a ultrdope piece, i see wot u gettin at, old school style. good shit.
RIP.

rtf if u got any time man.

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ya man, its good ta write bout something like this...it almost makes it easier
i just went through this exact thing(moms dad died of cancer)like not even a month ago....shits fucked man...seriously though...death sucks ass.....
stay up n stay strong man.....be a piller at the funeral..i think he would appreciate that..pz homie...good luck withthe funeral n wake.........

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

(Tony Green starts to shed a tear) Man this shit was deep really hitting man even thou it was simple I liked it. Shit my moms died when I was 7 and I gotta live with my grandma can't imagine the pain you going thru but be a soldier for your cuz, mom and the rest of your family.

POUR OUT SOME LIQOUR FOR KOOL COL-B GRANDFARTHER! R.I.P

btw rtf if you can!

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shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit sorry mayne i hope he rest in peace......i bet he was a good man..

i appreciate tha luv yall. yeah i'll try n rtf on tha guyz who sed 2. n R.I.P. 2 Daz's grandfather n Tony's moms, they all at tha crossroads now, werd

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yo, sorry to hear that man, its tough losing family members....but just be strong and feel at ease knowing he isn't suffering anymore (cause cancer is shitty).......this was a good piece for emotion, like you said, you didnt have good flow or structure, but it still had great emotion, keep up dog

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