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Old 04-10-05, 05:16 PM   #1
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Fuck you lazy open mic bitches

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How is it that I got guys like Village Pimp, Critic, In-Vision, Daz, Dabotos, metaskriptz and Tha Q telling me my open mics are super dope, ans saying they are confused why I dont have more feed... I could prolly be eligible to win Om of the month with one of my drops, or get into the hall of fame, and yet I still got hardly any feed? I give feedback on 20 different open mics, and 3 people return the favor?... the fuck is that, yes i'm in a bad mood now, I hate people who don't return the favor... I'm gonna go leave feed on 5 more om's now... and pray someone returns the favor on my dope open mics... peace

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Old 04-10-05, 05:22 PM   #2
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yeah, its bullshit on my alias i like voted on about 10 battles and asked for rtf and only like 2 or 3 people do.
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Old 04-10-05, 05:27 PM   #3
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maybe its because 75% of the site are newbs/asswhipes,

personally, i dont read open mics they bore me..
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Old 04-10-05, 05:53 PM   #4
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There's an open mic forum? Where?
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Old 04-10-05, 05:55 PM   #5
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uhhhh....cry baby thread...y do u want an e-rap award????
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Old 04-10-05, 05:59 PM   #6
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So he can get better. He wants feed, not an award. Only reason I'm on this site is to get better till I get to college or get signed. Whatever happens first.
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Old 04-10-05, 06:01 PM   #7
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i havnt seen u spit ne thing close to getting signed...even if there was such things as text record groups...so up
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Old 04-10-05, 06:02 PM   #8
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its true...people dont wanna RTF'S....
take it for what it is bro....just dont give feed
to the ones who dont return it anymore...thats what i do..
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n who is that majestic character..?.sounds like an ass...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 04-10-05, 06:03 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by tHa KiNG.D.HuG
i havnt seen u spit ne thing close to getting signed...even if there was such things as text record groups...so up

your a dumbass.........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 04-10-05, 07:21 PM   #10
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i havnt seen u spit ne thing close to getting signed...even if there was such things as text record groups...so up

I'm already signed to a text record label. It's called "Gangsta Misspellers". Here's a line from our single:

"We spit lines cuz we gangsta like crazy/
People say we iller than rapperz from the 1980's//"
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Old 04-10-05, 07:27 PM   #11
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Yeah fo real niggaz be grimey you'll leave feed on they shit but they want rtf n e one who leaves feed on my link in my sig I will rtf!
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Old 04-10-05, 11:13 PM   #12
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maybe its because 75% of the site are newbs/asswhipes,

personally, i dont read open mics they bore me..


They were mostly all respected ill heads that I gave feed for, it was the noobs that rtf more, rofl
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Old 04-10-05, 11:17 PM   #13
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um......lol........
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Old 04-11-05, 12:11 AM   #14
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^^^ ummm.... go leave feed hoe lol
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Old 04-11-05, 04:37 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by villagepimp
nice imagry & shit... dman... best rtf read ever... lol.... 8/10... keep it ol' schoo' pimpin' yo... (<-no idea why I just said that)


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Originally Posted by Dabatos
your imagery was more then dope man.. it was f'n amazing.. i could picture myself in that battle.. how i look around all my comrades are dead and im the only one standing up.. shyt.. this was a long piece.. and wen i first saw the whole verse i was like.. damn i gotta read this whole shyt?? hell no.. but then immidately after the first 6 bars.. i was like wow.. this shyt is good and then i continued on reading it.. I seriously can't wait for the second version.. yo u gotta promise me that you'll pm me wen this shyt comes out iight? dam


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holy FUCK headgames, why didn't you tell me about this earlier.....you may have had shitty structure (well not that bad), but your IMAGERY IMAGERY was fucking amazing, wow, its like i was fucking fighting that war.....holy shit, this seriously, was such an emotional/imaginative piece, unbelievable how you incorporated both those aspects so wonderfully, JESUS! i loved this.....and it wasn't predictable, WHICH IS SO REFRESHING.....FUCK YOU ASSHOLE, POST MORE OPEN MICS


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Originally Posted by In-Vision
this was a really dope piece...i loved the concept of this..especially since i did a...somewhat religious piece myself...and eventhough it's just references...it holds some appeal to me...because i did something similair...very nice though....


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Originally Posted by CriTiC
Sup man this is a very dope verse, I don't understand how you have had
so little feedback.

The emotions in the verse was on point, you painted a clear image on the
world in your writing which is dope.

Vocab was very good, flowed pretty nice lost it at points but u explained
why. Had inner rhyming which again is dope so altogether a pretty hott
verse.

1~


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Wow, I can really learn alot from you man. keep this shit coming. Normally I can do like, two things at once. But I told everyone on AIM to brb cuz i had to pay att: to this.

Keep this up. Mad props.

sweft


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Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
vocab n imagery was pretty feirce in this fam
im impressed, you need to drop more om's like this...
this was defiately the best of read from you thus far bro..
although the lines n ryhme scheme was a lil off, everything
else made up for it
..well done


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I can tell u don't do audio...LOL...I'd love to hear u hit the snare with these long lines...but they are well written

good message and concept...

everything was good...

However, this would be doper with more multies...


not bad homie


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This was a dope piece...
Really liked it alot...
It had lots of emotions...
Lots of feeling...
Structure was off...that the only thing you have to work on
Other then that it was a good drop..
Nice vocab..
Keep it up hope to see another drop from you .
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