heres a lil something i did not too long ago when i was bored(a lil diff)ENJOY!!

U wanna know about Me?.... Me?.... Me?
I am Brown Sugar with Caramel, topped with Honey...
Drizzled with subtle Feminity,
Dark brown Eyes filled with innate mystery.

Thyck, fun, pretty, and real
Have u experiencing things, u thought u'd never feel.
Until with my soft lips I seal
The emotional and physical bond between us in our sensuous deal.

Yeah, I have faults just like the next chick,
Yeah, I'm a little addicted to dick
Yeah, fucked up attitudes make me sick
Yeah, I like watching Booty Talk & Onion Booty Flicks
Yeah, Up my skirt I have a couple of tricks...
Yeah, I'd have u straight up whipped...
Yeah, u'd be Thinking of slurping my honey dip...
Yeah, when u see me I'd have ur stomach turning flips.
Yeah, I'd have u fantasizin about kissin my lips
Yeah, Imma freak who likes playing with whips...

But of all the things that I could/would do for u there is another one above...
Its Me, Myself, and I.... embracing Self-Love.

LOL this was coo ma... kinda flipped the whole topic. i didnt expect u to go off onto a sexual tangent. haha. real talk real talk. i needed a break from all the heavy shit i been peepin. liked this one... i'm bout to drop a new piece soon so keep an eye on the sig

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Yoooooooooo what's up shorty! Well, this was def. differnt. It was enjoyable to read and a good drop. Up your vocab. Your structure was stright I guess. yeah, It will be dope to watch you grow as a writer and maybe we can work on somethin together sometime.
Late
Sweft

HOLD ON!
Yo, you from Detroit. Wow, gotta lot of ppl I been seein from the D! Yo, I grew up like, Springwells and Center. Where you stay at!
I goto Texas State so im not their. But where you stay!
Late(again)

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lol thanx fo da feed guys; no doubt tho fo real

on da real!!! yea im from da D;downtown actually;yea us Detroit rappers is da best lol just messing

but neways thanx fo da feed again guys...1

This Was Ok...things Wrong Damn Theres Alot You Have Like Basically Zero Visual Which Is Not Good At All Also Vocab Is Like 1st Grade Here Which Basically Really Hurt This Poem I Liked How You Jumped Off Topic But It Was Actually Expected It Seems As If I Read This Before Dont Know If I Did But This Aint Good You Need To Work On Vocab And Imagery I Will Che K Your Future Pieces As Well

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Oh, you stay by Greek Town? Where.. Detroit is hella big..

Sweft

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