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Old 08-03-02, 03:07 PM   #1
IllLyricalthaDon
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Exclamation For all yall bout ta hate me...

IP: 48EF 78D2

Before yall respond to my several comments on yall's raps...peep what im workin with befo you hate...

I pop bitches in they mouth if they front sporadically,
Knock niggas up when they step erratically,
When yall niggas spit yall jus flatter me,
Now sit back an gawk ova my phat free,
I be dat nigga fuck yall up unconscious,
Comin at me wit ya shit itz nonsense,
Now all yall niggaz gonna put in ya two cents,
An authorities tellin me that im a nuisance,
I spit my phrases with lyrical fluency,
Spit it so fast itz unbelievably,
Yall niggaz wanna spit it? Get metaphorically,
Cuz im rippin dis mic like im historically,
Tha realest G that reppin it inanely,
Cuz yall know I spit mine insanely,
Now don’t think you me, take mine veinly,
What you think you Kurt Kobain G?
Ill blow ya head off wit my incredible rounds,
Shakin tha world’z ground wit my ill-lyrical sounds,
Poundin rhymes like asses in federal impounds,
Im sniffin out weak niggaz like a buncha blood hounds,
Yall step ya boundz ta fall down face first,
Im explodin this scene like a flame burst,
Yall spittin like you on tha level of Fred Durst,
Prepare ya self cuz you bout ta roll inna Black Hearse.

If you feel it good...if not deal...if you want to hear how it flowz on tha mic? hit me up...AOL s/n - SmokinDaBandit...1
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Old 08-04-02, 11:35 AM   #2
Zions Desciple
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Re: For all yall bout ta hate me...

IP: 14AC 325D

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Originally posted by IllLyricalthaDon



When yall niggas spit yall jus flatter me,
Now sit back an gawk ova my phat free,


Spit it so fast itz unbelievably,

Cuz im rippin dis mic like im historically,

Tha realest G that reppin it inanely,
Cuz yall know I spit mine insanely,

Now don’t think you me, take mine veinly,
What you think you Kurt Kobain G?



Yall spittin like you on tha level of Fred Durst,
Prepare ya self cuz you bout ta roll inna Black Hearse.



How do you rip a mic "historically"??????????

man what tha fuck is "unbelievebly, kurt kobain g?..." man u actually had tha fuckin nerves to call my shit whack.....your shit is fuckin more QUEER than whack son.....we should create a topic called "Hall of Shame" and put this piece in there.....

ps. DO NOT MAKE AN AUDIO....just wastin beats....fucking plant
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Old 08-04-02, 05:28 PM   #3
IllLyricalthaDon
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Unhappy get offa niggas dick

IP: B17F 053F

ay son dont hate cuz ya rhymes are faded, spittin ya shit fake like gold plated, nigga you cant comprehend my rhymes x-rated, get off my dick son i already masterbated...

now...befo you go jumpin on my dick you need ta recognize...

first issue...tha historically part...look after words...im sayin im historically tha illest rippin it inanely (silly - for tha stupid people)...secondly you need ta recognize tha use of vocab son cuz you jus weak...my shit made sense unlike yours...

secondly...tha unbelievably...itz called settin it up...tha line should read "i spit it so fast itz unbelivable"...but by adding on tha -ly youre setting up for a change of tense and "motion" in your rhyme...poetry 101 for tha stupid people like dis kat...

and thirdly...Kurt Kobain blew his head off...maybe if you watched tha news more...or read a paper?...tha next line i said i wuz gonna blow ya head off...OH MY GOD WHAT A CONCEPT!...KURT KOBAIN BLEW HIS HEAD OFF, AND I USED HIM AS A HELPER NOUN TO MY STATEMENT IM GONNA BLOW YA HEAD OFF...

finnaly...i said fo you not to hate...son even if you wanted ta hea somma my audio i wouldnt waste my time...obviously you got your feelings hurt because your shit was whack and made no sense...and you cant face tha facts...put simply...GET OFF MY DICK KID!...1
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