His eyes lay protuded from its socket. As a carcass would hang off a decaying vine tree. A visionary slave, shackled by his eyesight, blinded by extended existence. His soul spew out his pupil, mutilated and drilled into, as if the opening was the door out of his cell. The prison of his flesh....


Half
man laughter of wrath
flags above wrapped around his castle
disaster embattled this master pharoah
old age third millenium peak
where slaves behave from fear of being slained
from betrayal wain your teachings
in vain descent of worth against the grain
tossed loss was the gain flows into his industrial capularies
proletriat majesty rust improved taps of berries
poisonous wine of mind oinment
lotion of his juice produces motionless emotional quotients
divisions of one seeds run from slaughter
protect daughters and sons from massive collared chains
links my earth brain
knees bent into submission i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow
flush my system out pump blood thatruns brown
stained and drowned in pain
in shrouds i reign
mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected
infected by retrpospective
collective
thoughts set forth defective
these self explanatory metric patterns
encased in imbalance
sinful waste ego schitzophrenic rant challenge
chant away your sorrow
follow today in two ways
for no tomorrow is promised astonished and hollow
i regulary bleed to death and find my emptiness is filled with uncertainty
live when conception of time forms your norm
and ranking thru deception of minds
discredit your lives regulary we reak of wealth
belt around the beast belly
tell me
when one speaks to self meetings arise?
denied to reply?
surprised to converse
it told me he was not myself i was It manifested on Earth
vision of my eye varies
i'm blind really
but reality is not what was once my presence
and your essence
visual blessing that tore and lessened in worth by chored lessons
what you been taught to see is all you truely can grasp
and what you thought was tangible
is angled towards your entangled past
release my escape message
less wakeless days and sleepless nights
plight full strong power wisdom insightful fright
the more i knew the more it grew in size
and truth defied the lies
that became tools that shape this cesspool
of phthisis which is the fisted cyst
disturbed into my polluted misses chances at listening
took you for granted
forr we both chanted away our sorrow
follow today in two ways
for no tomorrow was promised demolished and hollow
morbid
for it was the core that burnt him most torrid
the light was not brighter
might was only metaphysical
metaphorically tore it
my recognition conditional to define premontions of mine
kind glow mind blow prime growth
lines grow thru my palace
shackled in silence callus
handed violence torture chamber of my corporate neighbors
i felt no more caverns of coal caving in
behaving in my misruled sanity
in lesser maker seperated duality

Mind swollen, this cavity filled with thoughts a battered past, shattered glass reflection of his matter. He who is created by this project rods neck prod pet of my rotten mesh organs. Disorganized ordinance of subordinate order by soldiers tied to my borders...

This poem was decent, it reminds me of my memoirs poem i just dropped last night, it seemed some of your words didnt fit well together,like you just thru any words together to see if they meshed, like the ending paragraph.....i see what you tried to do,but it just looks jumbled and doesnt flow well, as i read..some words dont even make sense, but its ok, with practice,you'll be better..but overall, this was decent..keep dropping..1

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