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Old 05-29-05, 11:08 PM   #1
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a war every day

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I wrote this thinkin bout what is happening around me.......jus being myself

everyday is like wakeing up in anotha war
is like the world I used to know is now gettin very far
some niggaz want me down and others support me
all this fights came without nobody warning me
spend my day in a frustrating feeling
this is a big wound that doesnt have a healing
fuck it if I cant win all of my fights
its enough for me trying to get sleep at nights
having to fake a smile so my homies dont worry
All I have are this rhymes that help me taste a lil bit of glory
when someone is around I have to act like a soldier
but when nobody is around I already lose my composure
I jus have to wait until this madness is gone
I still have enough strength to get the job done
cant take this away, cant wash this blood stains
sometimes I feel like I jus have to blow my brains
but thats only for cowards who want the easy way out
I must fight until the end cause there aint no quick route


gimme sum feedback and Ill return the favor
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Old 05-30-05, 01:08 AM   #2
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Old 05-30-05, 02:09 PM   #3
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Old 05-30-05, 10:07 PM   #4
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Old 06-03-05, 02:25 PM   #5
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Its Reeeeeeeaaaaaally Simple...
And Although It Was Real, It Been Done So Many Times...
At Times Your Lines Didnt Rhyme At All...
Sometimes That Doesnt Really Matter If You Have Internal Rhyming...
But Since You Didnt The Lack Of A Fallow Up Line Was Really Apparent...
I Wasnt Really Feeling This Though...
But Keep At It And Keep Elevating...
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