aight here we go, 10-16 lines
no bitin,
explained votes,
no feedin,
now since we battled, can you remove the dqs?

verse
Devine Visionary seein some Devine black/
cuz you been straight bitch slapped/
across the room, open the gat and spit at you/
leave you n ya whack rhymes, red, black, and blue/
Fuck some rap shit, fuck yo damn sig, fuck them DQ's/
it's gone be bone crushin, heat packed action, comin through/
you and ya boys head/
pullin ya out ya boys bed, to find yo body limped up, dead/
you ain't on this level/
fucken around wit the wrong nigga, jigga wigga, you bigga but gettin hit wit the shovel/
as the watch go tick tock/
you rockin round suckin cocks, on the spot/
got it locked, you on the phone cheatin on nigga at home gettin caught/
but it ain't yo fault you saw Mr.Kelly and just got too hott/
pussy heated bitch, suckin dick and luvin it, rubbin it, grubbin it/
in this battle, I'm bussin and he guzzlin it/

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

this is gonna be edited but just to take shit out the title

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

One more rule if you don't have or 100 posts then don't vote. The majority of newbies don't know shit about a flow.



Okay youngster this is the last time regardless of if you win or lose those 2 DQ's are staying.


my drastic tactics, will leave this wack-kid in baskets, like ramadong i swing fast-hits when i blast-shits//
sinful faggot get left in a casket, even as a toilet seat u still wont get that ass-kid, cuz ur flow bendable like plastic//
sayin ull beat me is a stretch, hope u elastic, this aint an ugly contest take off that mask-quick, we all know that u a scared-shit//
my punishment comes in many forms like stone cold to kane's chair-hit, u the type to wear a grizzly suit just to bear-it//
hazardous styles I'm straight unsafe like holes in trojans//
this niggas foldin, I "cant see you winnin" like Ray Charles coachin//
my level you'll never be approachin now grownup-ya rhymes are Makeup compared to my scriptured true dreams//
They Drag fuckin’ constantly-maybe it's you…or maybe it's Mabeline//
D'vine’s been known to rhyme exegetic till makin’ ya ass call a Medic//
Doctors find so much Sugar in Faggots like you that they label you a Diabetic//
Lettered alloys written in a Graduated ill Degree//
Adding Hollow tips in ya by the Mathematics of my Trigga-nometry//
My lyricism is Bullet formed requisitions//
Guns pointed to both of ya Ears to hear both sides of the Conversations//
Ya fuckin’ with grammar -acquisition mentals-parental discretion advised essentials//
Literature calibrated linguistics making ya spit with two absent genitals//

uppin

my man that is surely more than 16 lines, that shit is just bunched up inside lines, but whateva' uppin

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

next time specify that you want 1 bar=1 line other wise i could write 1 bar=5 lines

uppin

lol, I have to specify now that 1 bar = 1 line?! But does that mean that a rematch will go down?

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

up

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

damn dallas was wakk on this flow was shitty vocab was shitty yeah shitty lol......

flow=tie both fell me off alot
vocab=d'vine
meta=d'vine
multi=d'vin
punches=d'vine
overal verse=DEVINE VISIONARY

sinful faggot get left in a casket, even as a toilet seat u still wont get that ass-kid, cuz ur flow bendable like plastic//

LINE WAS ILL

vote=devine visionary
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Authentik Intelligence,
` Nuff Said.

^^^sure


1-0 me

rising

what does rising mean?

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

it means uppin