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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
04-22-05, 12:45 PM
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"Untraced Hype"
IP: 0F6A C933
A weak ass nigga..... Running his mouth he never knew what i'm about, i showed him tha door but he had already 'passed out', He aint ready for war- i leave you burning up like bitches in the 'south', he wanted to battle but now he's scared of me,- scared to be free- running loose like a refugee, Fuck exposing my history, i rather let you see, you would have to be...standing adequately if you want to get to me, told you i'm tight, when i write, i rule the dark like a night, so if your trying to see 'right' ask God show to you light, real bright, still hype, loading out that steel right- and if you wanna still fight then you can feel sniped, My justification, on aligations, emotion to activation so when i get into situations i handle it like a speculations, a formation like torn nations my gats blaze like storms braving. you know...you ducked and never came back |
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04-22-05, 03:44 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
no hate... because it was decent but Untraceable would own you
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 88 miles per hour should do it. |
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04-22-05, 04:40 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
This was okay... it could have been alot better..
If you had better structure first off... you need to try to match up your bars.. try to use some better personals , your punchlines were iight i felt they could have been alittle better... try to elevate on your wordplay , and vocab , .. overall this was an okay , drop but it could have been alot better.. keep it up , and drop a link please or this will be closed
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04-23-05, 12:04 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 447D 28DB
This is nothing....i ripped him already, tha drop is in here but no one's responding to it.
this is just a freestyle i aint even feeling it myself, but thankz for tha love yall |
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