Prophetic Visions

ThE SiXtH eLeMenT- the corossive dosage of divine testaments that paralyze the common sense....
patternized lenth of stanzas of compassion to express compacted emotions thru verbal vents....
spirits are dense- bent beyond recognition and formal appearances, caverns echoe the thoughs in past-tense....
chambers of divine intellect that propell truth in balled contents to propose a new defense for the weak and the unarmed pysique....
armories and weaponries force heat onto streets as backyards resonate of the common fleet....
when armed to the teeth with knowledge and understanding of self- there is no defeat....
what's death but life's opposite, and livin itself is a bitch
therefore death is a divine female with a pure fragrance that begs me to drown in my own bliss....
suicide attempts fall short because of the blades length....
I guess my bodies trained to fight pain- with a hard heart and leather encased veins....
the stigmata terrains of religious oppositon cannot be restrained.....
I strike in vain- to honor those who've fallen victim to a falsely worshipped in name....
who in death found nothing but an abyss of nothing- no rewards, just shame....
configured minds usually devise lies to tie down the limbs of those who wish to fly....
who wish to travel the galaxies of inner beauty and force all the elements to collide....
tramautized cries that shoot thru maroon skies- in the blood of innocence my head was baptized....
trained with a dull knife- and lead to believe that I could prophecize the future lights of trying times....
then I glared into the sphere of falsehoods.....
and entered the circlet of mendacious and gifted tactics with three figures draped in hoods....
set to conquer the globe with a pestilence contained in an infected flood....
skulls and boned figurerines latent the mud....

Stay tuned for PV-2.....let the saga continue

dopeness? nope its just dope for vocab

didn't even look or sound like it had a meaning... if it did... fucking define every word you used in this to maybe shine some light on why this is the way you put it

peace

signed,
~madd

from what i could make of it, it seems like you changed subject matter at least once during that... i dunno, maybe you could try and explain some of what you had written.. sounds like you have a well of words to use though, and that's always good..

aiight aiight...negative comments are good......can we get some people that know Poetry come in here...uppn

I Actually Thought This Was Dope..

I Use To Write Like That..

And If This Was Somehow Converted To Audio It Would Be Ill..Especially Over A Stoupe Beat..

Stay Up Bro..

i dont even know if itz dope fo vocab...man you had no flow in that...talk about poetry? that isnt even good poetry dawg...you never had a rythm down and you were tryin ta rhyme wordz that wouldnt normally work too well...like rhymin psyique, fleet, defeat, bliss? an length...that bliss line shoulda been cutt, way outta patern son...bottom line...you asked dopeness?...you shoulda been askin whackness?...

if anything is whack, its your "bling bling gansta signature" ya fucking plant...


"yall know i spit tha illest lyrically, yall kats know me an itz plain ta see" <~~~how fuckn original, ELEVATE bitch


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The way i read it, it had a flow but made no sense to me, i dont know, im a stupid mothafuka, thats why i listen to rap instead of readin books about quantom physics at the librabry, to me this sounds like a sientist tryin to rap....

but not the worst i seen in here......

Oh Fuck I Hate People Who Say That..

If A Piece Don't Have Tha Word Gun, Most Of You Single Minded Peons Don't Like It..

I Guess Thats Whats Gangsta Rap Does To Ya..

*Sigh*

ay son dont hate on me...im doin my thing an obviously youre tha one who needs ta elevate...an my signature is part of an inside joke that obviously you cant comprehend...do me a favor son an go play in some traffic...then step ta me once ya get some betta rhymes...1

that was good...nice vocab......keep it up....pz

naw, N-Demik, thats what the New Jersey Plublic Schools English department does to you.

Well Since Im Not From NJ I Couldn't Give A Fucc..

And Stop Freeposting In This Thread, Or I'll Delete Some Posts..