Yo say.... say.....

Commin from the street I see man change
niggaz do da same, diss everytime sum1 halla my name
They say practice makes up the masta
I've done this 4 sum time, That's why Ive grown fasta
In da club when I do my freestyles I hear no niggaz clap
My heart stopped,I was lost far but I made it back
Heat It or love it Ax will grow up n shine
there ain't no way I can stop this time
Will not leave tha fam like my boy soulja slim
Family, fuck that we all a fuckin team
If its necessary I'll become a killah
so step in my way n I be stompin u like godzilla
So simple like take a nine n load a bullet
so simple like grab the trigger and pull it
Shot me, I'll be a survivor!!!
Destiny makes a child now even tighter
no vest on, pure muthafuckin muscle
Ax dog is a pimp, a thug and a hustla

Cut that shit.....

AX zhizza

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Bizzacckkk

Rate plz... pc

??? out of 10?????

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Bizzacckkk

mmmm
not really good,not hate,bad structure,you flowed at the begining,and lost it at the end,no originality,but ive seen worst from a newb,so on /1o i give u 6

yeah it was okay.. up structure and vocalb.. start reading more text and excel from their..
hmm.. i give you a 5/10..
Sweft

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