Battle Rules:

10-26 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO CREW VOTES AT ALL!

4-0 KO
300 TO VOTE

The Council vs Livin' Legendz

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 04-30-05 at 10:23 AM

Must drop verse in 4620 minutes after check in.

Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 12:37 PM.

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 10:37 PM.

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nice drop

shame about the first two bars though
cuz that me no longer king line so i changed my name has been used too many times and SPuL only just used a line on me capitalisin every word like a week ago when our battle first went up!!!!!!!

and truth be told..........how does that me only signing on at night work....hello i just dropped my verse midday............but still nice drop......gud luck!!!!!

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checkin polls......nice clean crew battle. i think the outcome will come the same as ya'll last battle!

nice battle fam.. checkin it out... nice drops from both.. damn we need to get votes in this shyt

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

Round 2 with this cat, but this time the conclusions gonna change
This bitch saw the fact he wasnt "king" so he went and changed his name*
8/10...nice personal here
Homie capitalizes the first letter in ever word in his verse, thats whack
Because USING CAPS is the only way your WORDS HAVE A BIG IMPACT
6/10...okay punch but kinda played
Internet must be ya life, always talking personal on this site, yo
Just being real you'd die without the "Web" just like "Sacremento"**
8/10...althoguh the 1st line had wack word choice, the 2nd was nice
Thinking you hot, but your not, dawg Really someone needs to slap you
You always got the "Crowd Clappin" cuz there always "Shooting at you" lmao!
6/10...nice punch but you had a filler
Printing fakes off ya computer is the only way you "making cash"
I'll take ya "heart" out and "set on it", so you'll finally "beat my ass"
7/10...lol 2nd was dope but wasnt feeling the 1st punch
Your rhymes need help, I suggest on you getting the first aid kit
Or use the Washin powder you been promotin to 'freshin' ya verses a bit
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186173
6/10...nice personal, but wasnt really feelin it for some reason
your only "dope in your dreams" maybe thats why you only sign on at "night"
USing ya sig to act like ya got bitches cuz ya can't get them in real life
6/10...2nd line wasnt great
I "RUn" all over bitches like you, just like "Steve Nash"
Maybe you should recycle ya rhymes since its good to "recycle trash"
7/10...lol at the closing line, first wasnt great though
67.5%
nice verse you had some fucking killer lines in this, one of the best verses ive seen you drop...only thing needing improvement was multies and vocab which arent really that important

[FLASHBACK]
I Broke This Clowns Neck..I Got Over-Excited With An Exorcist Impression…
But Ya Never Looked Like A Battler..More Like A Sex Addict In Session…
[/FLASHBACK]
5/10...wasnt feeling this opener at all
Return Bout!! History Repeats Ya Lookin To Get Scratched Like Mixin Decks…
I Mean Truth Is The Only Talent Ya Ever Shown Is When Ya Scriptin Checks…*
6/10...first line played, 2nd wasnt feeling, but it was okay
Bitch Ya Can’t See Me I’m Camo’ed..Not Minded This Hoez Military Blinded…
Ya Verse Goin Downhill Son Cuz That Snapped Neck Got Ya Head Lopsided…
7/10...decent personal and i liked how you referred back to the first line
This Ain’t Even A Battle..We Shootin Pool Up Here The Way I’m Breakin Balls…
I’m The Matchmaker of Hoez..Lyrical Dials Up Now He Knows Solo’s Takin Calls…
7/10...decent
I’d Say Ya Skillz Were Fallin Son..But Shit Man, They Already Six Feet Deep…
Dude’s A Fluffed Up Crossbreed..The End Result Of When Dicks Meet Sheep…
6/10...first line=good, 2nd line=wtf
“King Solo I’ll Kill Ya”…The Best You Can Do, I Admit Ya Attempts Are Bold…
It’s a Shame That I Gotta Ice Ya Ass In This Battle..But Yo, The Game Is Cold…
7/10...this was a lil played
[END THOUGHTS]
Got Owned Again..I Wonder Will Anyone Ever Fix The Mistakes They Make…
Maybe Not!! Cuz If They Did Then Lyrical Would Be At The Bottom Of A Lake…
[/END THOUGHTS]
8/10...LMAO...thats funny, nice leader and dope fucking closer
66%
this verse was also nice so no hate in this vote, wasnt feelin your opener though, dope ass closer, iight multies,okay personals, good punches....you had hard competition

overall:
opener-l
closer-s...though lyrical had a good one, solo's was better
multies-s
punches-l
wedplay-l
structure-l....wasnt feeling your structure solo

v/lyricalflowz
(honest vote, no hate....dope fucking battle though)

Voted For: lyricalflowz

like woua!
This battle is hella dope
but lyricalflowz wins,
You had a nice flow,nice personals,dooope vocab,imma lurn from you.nice structure,
Homie capitalizes the first letter in ever word in his verse, thats whack
Because USING CAPS is the only way your WORDS HAVE A BIG IMPACT

made me laught lol,pretty dope man,

J-Dot had a good verse but not enough for LyricalFlowz,
Return Bout!! History Repeats Ya Lookin To Get Scratched Like Mixin Decks…
I Mean Truth Is The Only Talent Ya Ever Shown Is When Ya Scriptin Checks

your best line,pretty cool


Vote: LyricalFlowz
no hate only an honest vote

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