Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO


...wastin my damn creditz

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-12-05 at 09:14 PM

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CLosed, 3-0 KO

Newkid has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 09:16 PM.

when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn'
u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space
think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT'
yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl

he like blak queen
from da westside LA
hiz sig da answer made david wesley fall

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 09:42 PM.

Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?*
Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet
Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is
Looking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked
Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact
Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold

*Kordozar is his brother...
...the rest are up there
you should practically know already...

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Voted For: Newkid

dayum i gotta give this to newkid..imma honest voter for real..and new kids punches were all around harder...and so were the personals......i was feelin his shit...skiprtz ur shit was nice too,..but u got bad set ups and wordplay and the way u word shit sounds too....basic...u know..but nice personals.

but overall newkid had the much better verses...with the punches and personals........structure skriptz got....flow....newkid got....multi's newkid got it

vote: new

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Voted For: Newkid

Newkid...aka Kordozar's brother...have we even met?*
Practically has so many wins...he's not even a vet
^^wasnt feeling ..not really a punch
Fag will never be ready...like kids who get pop quizzes
He signed up for the punchline league...
.........................but he doesn't know what that is
^^hmm, decent but simple
Looking like a retard kid...shades looked like there cracked
Typing Like This ...will probably give you more Impact
^^ahh,nope.. links are played to shit man
Your skillz are shit...cause they are looking like mold
Only time you think your rhymes are dark...
.................................is when your typing in bold
^^weak closer...
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you need some word play or personals that'll connect
cuz ya attempts really aint hitting ....srry scripts this was horrible for a verse...........
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when i clap things..........you gon b layin on ya BaK KiNg
'skriptz still aint loyal'..no matta how much he beg n 'write BlaK QuEEn'
^^lol,.decent opener
u wanna be a thug...onli hood u live n iz ya coat head-space
think he push pounds....but like'BiGGie now'u dealin sum 'DEAD WEIGHT'
^^hmm, not bad...didnt hit hard though
yo i was n 'LA' ya momz was on mah dik so i had 2 'dodg-er'
cuz she kept 'throwin her head at mah ballz' like a 'game of soccer'
^^i dont like momma disses but shit was worded well...
ya name SkRiPtZ....but like ya keyboard don't work ya 'TeXt Iz OfF'
n da 'AnSwEr'2 ya sig iz...dat ya wak ass verse iz wat DaViD WeSlEy FaLl
^^decent closer....forced ryhme but still decent...
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you had a couple bars that was nice..good opener...
not much competition though...against ya...ya flow was koo
ya opener was ya best line i think.....
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RTF......in the sig.........

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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