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04-27-05, 05:17 AM
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www.militantmusic.com
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real shit (a must read!)
IP: CBD1 4982
Im married to my pen and pad i use em to depcit streets views...
How the goverment is dectiful and how i want the world to be peacfull... If i have a nine i get locked up,but in texas shot guns are leagll... And in idaho fireing squads are the officail way off death... Bush usein money for a pointless war fore he pays the debt... What the fuck is wrong with the country... We got homeless in the street they hungrey... Begin on freeway corners for a buck to eat... What happened to this man that he suffered defeat... This is insanity solidas is in iraq thatll never again see there family... What a clamity but maybe this is the way the world had to be... So we can speak are views with out bein scared... Im more then well aware we livin in despair... Ive been through so much shit that in time i well exspress... Not to impress but to lay all the haters to rest... My constant unstability is the begging of my credibillity... I feel that i well never see any tranquailty... In my life time but with the right rhyme i can see a better life... Sell out to the main stream style id much ratther die... I well alwasy rap about hood politics and hollow tips... Teen mothers havein alcholic fits fuck all that shit... They cant feed there child to young to provide... We cant subside or divide we need to unite... And become one cause in some way we all under the gun... No more arguein between eachother we all under the sun...
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04-27-05, 05:21 AM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: CBD1 4982
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04-27-05, 05:27 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
yo homie.. this shit dope.. u got good flow, nice wordplay, and i like ya structure and vocab.. this was a real nice piece.... 8.5/ 10...
rtf on my open mic plz..
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04-27-05, 05:31 AM
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IP: CBD1 4982
cool man thanks for ya feedback
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04-27-05, 05:08 PM
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IP: CBD1 4982
uppin.............................................
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04-27-05, 05:14 PM
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IP: CBD1 4982
uppin............................................. ......
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04-27-05, 09:26 PM
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IP: 6804 D41F
uppin ladies......................................
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04-27-05, 10:38 PM
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IP: 6804 D41F
last tim euppin...................................
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04-28-05, 01:03 AM
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Play Nice or Play Dead
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IP: 28AD 5545
nice drop. like I said on msn, you should work on making ya lines less simplistic. other than that...dope. 6/10
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04-28-05, 02:43 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
not a bad drop, but try to up ya vocab
n get a little more complex when tacklin important issues such as this....sometimes it helps to the research the topic your writing about to gain other perspectives and to obtain new ways to approach a subject......decent....6/10
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-28-05, 08:03 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 3B8D A3C4
ey yo dis shit was dope.....good vocab,structa
flow,erthing was pretty tight on dis 9/10
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04-28-05, 08:06 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: DD02 1081
wow!!, everything good except structure 9/10 good shit
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04-28-05, 09:06 PM
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The Games Prodigy
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IP: A729 7192
Very nice shit keep it up mayne
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04-29-05, 01:44 AM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: BDD4 FE73
thanks for the love yall leave a link and ill check out ya shit
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04-29-05, 02:01 AM
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IP: BDD4 FE73
uppin.................................
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