Battle Rules:

10-Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-30-05 at 10:19 PM

Must drop verse in 350 minutes after check in.

AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 04:30 PM.

MiSk has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 04:33 PM.

you rookie haven't done enough laps around the track...
ya havent had 1 hot battle, ya know your texts are "wack"

i take a second to speak, i keep my A-U-T Omatic "in reach"
i ain't talkin romance, but you'll get swept off ya "feet"

you have no escape, from this mass mind rape
play this again and then "Be Kind and Rewind" the tape

your rhymes arent "dope", they wont give you a "hit"
try smoking from the wrong end of a broken cigarette

when you "drop", yah gonna think its tha bomb
it'll have everyone laughing, like a kid playin "DonkeyKong"

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Ima BEAT UP THIS NOOB AND EAT HIM TA DEATH..'took-his-brain'..I dont NEED YA DAMN RESPECT……
dont he SEE IM THE BEST..?!?, I FEED EM A CHECK..ya.messin wit a LEADING MAN IN TEXT…….
Hes WEAK IN THE CHEST AND CHEEKS ARE A MESS.. plus ya punches 'Never-land' like if PETER PAN WAS DEAF…….

judging by your sig..I think its time that you PART-WITH-YOUR-BROKEN-CREW…..
hardly-am-I-joking-dude..this is misk’s 'accupuncture session' cause Im just STARTING-TO-POKE-AT-YOU…….

come on...look at ya avy..?? Its OBVIOUS this PESSANT ISNT HARD…..
like 50 cent in tephlons siggy u look like u just gave 'head' to some un PLEASENT PRISON GUARDS……

your the example of a SEL(shell)FISH RAPPER Im the type they name ELVIS AFTER……
I SMELL DISASTER leave misk ridin a 'cart' like an 'elder' with a PELVIS FRACTURE…….

uppin this for votes..............................

nice drop...good luck...didnt have time to sit and write... had to drop mine real quick

uppin for votes......................................

Voted For: AutoMatik

automatik gets this though both verses were close...i wasnt really feeling this battle and felt both of yall could have upped your verses a lil more...
automatik-good:you had gtood multies throughout, also nice werdplay, punches and personals
bad:your structure was off, and i wasnt feeling your opener

misk-good:also nice punches and werdplay, good structure, bad:wasnt feeling the opener or closer, you also coodve had some multies

overall:
opener-m
closer-a
multies-a
punches-tie
werdplay-tie
flow-tie
personals-a

v/automatik

^thanks uppin for more votes......................

Voted For: AutoMatik

took this one with his multies. tHIS WASnt the hottest verse, But I can see you got some potential to be dope. Yo structure wasnt all that great either, but yo verse flowed well. misk, I couldnt give you this vote becuase yo punches werent making any sense. They just seemed unfinished, and spit because they rhymed. I think you have a lot more elevating to do than automatik. automatik gets my vote with a all around better verse, and harder multies.

other categories are irrelevant to vote under in this battle.


automatik...you got skilz...check out my crrew Livin' Legendz. I would put u on tha elevation roster, but you should be off soon, becuase I can see you got potential. Just post somewhere in there saying that you want in...and I'll get you down...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187032


good battle....check us out

~1~

Voted For: AutoMatik

yo on da real ya strukture was terrible it made ya verse seem wakk as shit yo fix dat

u had betta punches n dis verse

openor-automatik he had a aight punch n dat openor
punches-automatik betta punches overall
personals-misk he had betta personals
metas-none
multies-automatik
strukture-misk
wordplay-none
closer-automatik

aight yo automatik took dis he had betta punches he put more effort n 2 hiz verse u gotta fix ya strukture ya shit lookz wakk as hell on da real fix ya strukture n yea cum a lil harder next battle

v-automatik

uppiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes.....................

thanks for the tips....
like i said...just starting out....
trying to gain experience