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Old 05-01-05, 09:10 PM   #1
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/speatsmusic.htm

sorry for the quality,well the hiss

iu left feed on Nintendo thing by enygma,ill leave another oneby tonight
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Old 05-02-05, 04:52 PM   #2
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Old 05-02-05, 06:19 PM   #3
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its a good idea.....parts of it i thought were good.......lost ya flow a couple times
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Old 05-02-05, 06:43 PM   #4
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thx very apreciate it
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Old 05-02-05, 07:16 PM   #5
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*listening*

classical type music.......this usually turns into a deep type of track. Alright man, I don't think that this beat matches your lyrics. Your flow is all over the place man. This would be a tough beat to spit to, so you should probably stick to some easier beats. Just til you get the hang of your flow. brush this up a bit, cause right now it sounds like you seriously didn't even give the slightest bit of effort.
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Old 05-02-05, 11:31 PM   #6
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quality is like off and on cuz your shit is off on mixing a little bit hook sucks dick hard its garbage lyrics is ok here beat is wayyyyyy too slow for hip hop way too sloe your flow is way off on the second beat you should use better flow beats....................
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Old 05-03-05, 07:49 AM   #7
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teres a chorus on the song???? where where???
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Old 05-03-05, 02:55 PM   #8
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lol...listenign now..........

damn beat is coo..a bit slow tho 4 a rap flow..
lyrically its nice, can tell u took time ova te content..ur flow is off a lil bit..ur not hittin the snare on the end of ur lines consistently....quality is a bit shaky, some bits sound clear n others r a bit fuzzy, thers no real hiss...ur emotion come sthru well..nice spielberg line

id say up ur quality - beta equip
work on ur flow, probs use a easier beat yo..write to da beat n try n hit the snares

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Old 05-04-05, 12:20 AM   #9
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peepin this diddy just for u speats. lol aight getin some adlibs on here i c. u remind me of myself wen i started. i used to flow real slow n shyt. i know its a slow beat but u coulda dun better. comin from tha heart. sumtimes u get louder n then soft. u should realy get sum emotions out. this is an emotional song if this beat is rocked correctly u should make me cry. lol. dunno what this song has to do with net beef but yea. u lett tha beat ryde for a minute here. hmmm pretty short. keep at it i kno u jsut startin n all . lol get at me if u wanna hear some of my older songs wen i started like a year n a half ago. sound pretty simalar. its some inspiration if n e thing lol i used to b wack as helll.....but ppl still felt my tracks cuz i put sum personality into em. just work on that. be an individual
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