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08-07-04, 03:18 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
[him] she left her bitter words to me by screened email a blank message i checked attachments for details a nigga’s first problem is tryna stay monogamous my anger is a problem, notice i can’t get it fixed oh, uhmm, yea you see that’s my best friend’s pic too busy in tha streets for her to jock my dick you are the best in bed, my first without seconds you limit this love, askin’ me to change my methods! i hid my gunz, u want me to remove my tatoos?! don’t respect me even when i knock sense into you! you sayin’ it clearly that you want me far away.. you can forget this phase cuz tonight you gonna stay come to me in person u just might not get choked this man don’t cry-> keep these blank words you wrote i’m just that damn good, i’m glad you look up to me.. baby you love me and your heart can’t get rid of me! [her] the other reason my pen won’t explain my scars.. you took it too far, try to get to ‘work’ without my car! learn this one thing, a passive person always thinks! just like minds don’t act, maybe your eyes don’t blink didn’t care for this princess, but u dreamin’ of castles he’s a wanna-be-thug don’t pop gunz only snapples! ya gunz wow, they happen to shoot out little pellets can’t get me in paintball, u got ya tatoos from 7-11! u hardcore but think Benzino should win BET awards?! SEX? your ‘excited’ moment actually makes me bored! you would look at me once, your body would pour out! your soul would invite me in, the problem’s ya mouth! you spoken words, i’m staying? naw u stay in doubt.. touch me again so i can show you what death is about! this real arrogant person is tryna hang with my class? u had ur chance, what’s good from you? kissin’ my ass! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ when we were together i wrote this letter tellin’ you it was aight but i’m much better than what and when you speak of perfect lies__ left it blank cuz this once “relationship” has died ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ***** -Words are taken personally no matter the length those words reveal one’s true heart- don’t be fooled..  ~Lady Fiya~ *****
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08-07-04, 05:30 PM
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IP: DFD5 B866
whoa..................... a lot of emotion going through this drop it was madd hott...... expressed pain & anger...........loving it ~nice drop!!!~ all flowed together well but that didn't matter just the words you used was enough to make it hott....  you might be Poet Of August.... 
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08-07-04, 05:35 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
^well i'ma go for it, thanx, For$aken...
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08-07-04, 08:39 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
good shit baby girl...keep them coming
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08-07-04, 10:22 PM
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IP: EFDF 488F
i likes that... fiya in da hole!...lol
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08-08-04, 01:08 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo, hott drop right here. I was feelin' this. You had a lot of emotion on this. And the flow was off da heezy fa sheezy. But yea, this was a realy nice drop. I liked how you did it from his perspective and then from hers. That was tight. Overall, I give it a 9.5/10. Fiya drop. Poet of August should be you.
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08-08-04, 03:34 PM
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IP: A621 A1C1
This was an Amazing drop in my opinion.All the emotion was extroardinary and your rhymes were real hot.I liked how the 'him' version was a tough guy and he was trying to be real macho,and the 'her' was dissing him by saying embarassing stuff about him that was funny.You are a real good poet and keep on writing.Maybe next month's poet will be you!Goodluck and rep hard.
9/10.
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08-08-04, 03:38 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
^aight thanx y'all i love the feedback..
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05-03-05, 07:28 PM
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IP: 744C D310
damn. wut else can i say but damn? shit wuz...wow. ionno...dis reply mite be corny or w/e but im speechless n dat jus dont happen ta me cuz i alwayz got sunthin ta say. this piece wuz hott tho on da real tip. loved the 2 different view points. funny thing...i kno niggas n they girl who this applies to -smh-. o well...keep doin wut u do ma. im thru...i give up...i retire
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