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accomplish has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-05 02:37 PM.

Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-05 02:50 PM.

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Voted For: Mad Dog

this pussy ain't a contender so im'a shred this puppy like a blender
fucking faggot this guy is wack as fuck on a microphone he's a bender
3...decent use of multies, but the overall punch was lacking, and the played concept didnt help at all!!
crawly is a shit hole and your rapping really is so iritating
so just quit all that audio cuz your not a rapper in the making
4...not played, but the setup is more moaning than punching him, and the punchline was far too basic!!
my flows will put you 6 feet under next to your grandma's corpse
i love pissing you off because all you ever do is bitch talk
4...ok, this was weak, i mean you love pisisng him off cuz he bitch talks, that is sumthin that a kid would drop!!
this dude can't even walk so i'll rip his spine out 2 make him worse
his family are a buch of nerds and they are the biggest bitches of earth
3...what the fuck!!! the first line was weak but then the 2nd line was pure bullshit!!! try punching ya opponent instead of talkin a load of shit!!
he has a son but when he grows i'll shoot his ass wid guns
when you step up 2 the master your ass is always gonna get sonned
3...more shit talkin!! and i do believe that you self-glorified, not the worst kind of glorifying but still it is played like fuck!!
your a bitch made so let me take a pin out my granade n throw it in ur face
all you are is a waste of space so i'll beat you 2 death wid a suitcase
4...beat to death with a suitcase!!! come on son, a battle is supposed to be about dissin ya opponent!! not about idle internet threats!!
that picture of you scared me sling your hook before i put u in a cemetary
cuz nobody is more uglier den you shouldn't be in the dark cuz ur scary
2...2nd line makes no sense, i mean if he is ugly and scary that he SHOULD be in the dark!! little mix up of words there!!
don't think your gonna win this because i'll be damned if i lose to you
but before you get KO'd im the one that you'll commit suicide to
3...aight the suicide deal is wack, its been done so many times before and this wasn't even a good way of using a played concept so NO!!

OVERALL: 26/80


This must be part one thousand 2 hundred and seventy nine,
Ya been whored so many times i'm surprised his ass isn't wide,
4...ok this was a weak opener, the whole number deal in the setup was weak filler, and the punchline was kinda played!!
accomplish...tell me what is you've actually done in ya life?,
Ya don't belong on this site ya punch weight is light and all ya do is entice,
5...ok use of multies, but again the setup was borderline between wack and good.....and then the punch just wasn't hitting!!
When you whinge and whine all the time And theres ya audio,
Tried to spit but deleted ya soundclick coz of ya horrid flow,
5...finally a punch....but you came pretty basic and ya rhymin wasn't the best, ya cud've thrown in some wordplay or sumthin to make it more creative!!
Oh if you haven't guessed already people this is Sinner i'm dissing,
So get ready for the same old senseless shit he's always spittin,
5...first line was wack, if it is Sinner ya cud've done a nice diss on the old name or sumthin, instead ya just made a statement sayin it was him and the punch was more filler!!
He's had a REAL hard life and everyone around him hates him,
He worships Em like he's a country and Sinners an angry patron,
5...personally, eminem lines are gay and played, you came pretty basic and the setup was just bleh!!
His real records got over 90 losses overall, ya suck is all i gotta say,
Ya battle as regular as C.A.L.I...but ya records the other way,
6...LoL!!! this was actually an ok punch, ya dissed him here and it actually hit, but ya need to up the wordplay or sumthin!!
Still gettin bullied...or have you manned up to them dudes?,
Prolly got smashed up bog washed and left locked in the loos,
5...an ok bit of wordplay in the 2nd line, the vocabs were too basic and really ya not bringin anything original!!!
Hold up that's kinda like Eminem in that track Brain Damage,
Ya one beating there and another one...rap & Sinner jus don't manage,
5...weak closer, ya played on the whole eminem thing again and it didnt work the first time so it aint gonna work now!!!

OVERALL: 40/80


This battle was real weak!!!
Accomplish had a lot of shit talkin and useless filler and i dont think he brought a single punch, mad dog came weak, some played concepts, no real wordplay or anythin overly creative, but if this is Sinner he was battling i can understand why he didnt try that much, Sinner seriously needs to elevate and Mad Dog i know ya capable of better shit than that!!!

V/ - Mad Dog

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Voted For: Mad Dog

DAMN! Ok Diz Wuz Hot Hot Hot! Propps Yall, Ima Break It Down 4 Yall Homeboys=

*And there's me thinking he learned his lesson*

This must be part one thousand 2 hundred and seventy nine,
Ya been whored so many times i'm surprised his ass isn't wide,
accomplish...tell me what is you've actually done in ya life?,
Ya don't belong on this site ya punch weight is light and all ya do is entice,
When you whinge and whine all the time And theres ya audio,
Tried to spit but deleted ya soundclick coz of ya horrid flow,
Oh if you haven't guessed already people this is Sinner i'm dissing,
So get ready for the same old senseless shit he's always spittin,
He's had a REAL hard life and everyone around him hates him,
He worships Em like he's a country and Sinners an angry patron,
His real records got over 90 losses overall, ya suck is all i gotta say,
Ya battle as regular as C.A.L.I...but ya records the other way,
Still gettin bullied...or have you manned up to them dudes?,
Prolly got smashed up bog washed and left locked in the loos,
Hold up that's kinda like Eminem in that track Brain Damage,
Ya one beating there and another one...rap & Sinner jus don't manage,

Yo U Went Hard Wit Da Personalz, I Mean Lyke Woah Dawg! U Bought It RAW! Da Personalz Wuz Killin It, Da Flow Wuz On Point, Punches Cant Be Faulted, & Da Wordplay? Dawg I Cant Be Mad At Dat Yo! Everythin Wuz Real Nice Frum U, An U Added Sum British Humour In There 2 Lyke ''Loo'z'' n Shit, Good Use Of Vocab, Wit An Humour, Yo Verse Wuz Juz Live Man! Great Verse

this pussy ain't a contender so im'a shred this puppy like a blender
fucking faggot this guy is wack as fuck on a microphone he's a bender
crawly is a shit hole and your rapping really is so iritating
so just quit all that audio cuz your not a rapper in the making
my flows will put you 6 feet under next to your grandma's corpse
i love pissing you off because all you ever do is bitch talk
this dude can't even walk so i'll rip his spine out 2 make him worse
his family are a buch of nerds and they are the biggest bitches of earth
he has a son but when he grows i'll shoot his ass wid guns
when you step up 2 the master your ass is always gonna get sonned
your a bitch made so let me take a pin out my granade n throw it in ur face
all you are is a waste of space so i'll beat you 2 death wid a suitcase
that picture of you scared me sling your hook before i put u in a cemetary
cuz nobody is more uglier den you shouldn't be in the dark cuz ur scary
don't think your gonna win this because i'll be damned if i lose to you
but before you get KO'd im the one that you'll commit suicide to

Iight, Iight, U Got Sum Nice Rhymez 2 Dawg, Nuthin Out Of The Ordinary Tho, Personalz Wuz Tite Also, Not Much Creative Wordplay & Punchez, But Still Dat Shit Wuz Pretty Solid, Good Job

Both Came Strong, But Mad Dogz Flow Wuz Damn Near Flawless Dawg! Nobody Can Be Mad At Dat Or Diz Vote, Cuz Mad Dog Wuz RAW This Time Around

Vote/ Mad Dog

Plz Return Da Favor In Mah Signature, I Kno U'd Expect Da Same If U Voted Dawg!!!!!!!! Pz Out, Good Job Both

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Voted For: accomplish

I liked the vocab, the puchlines and the structure you were very well and I luv the flow you got tight shit you got there..........I liked mad dog`s vocab and punchlines but I think accomplish`s flow is stronger so my vote is 4 him

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RTF votes = RTF'd uppin this thread for some more votes

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Voted For: Mad Dog

yo im gonna have to say you beat him

mad dog....you just had a solid flow and diss, you kinda exposed him too, lol funny shit becuase i understand your guys beef, LOL sinner you need to up your game dog, youve been here long ebough so you should be more elevated than others, but for some peopel rapping aint there thing ......but anyway no one had any dope lines at all just the structure and how the flow was..mad dog had better flow..

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Mad dog also had alot better vocab and sinner lacked alot of things, he just wasnt up to standards, if you just battle here more you will catch up to pace and evebtually get better but work on your metaphores, if there was any in your verse i could not tell...your lines seemed like sentences that rhymed, which means they had no flow ..........so mad dog wins this

Voted For: Mad Dog

ha very one sided, mad got this easy

accomplish - structure and flow good, punches, personals, meta etc etc etc were real weak, played punches and not one connected in any way, sorry but not good here

mad dog - structure and flow gud, punches were creative and funny liked the cali line and the setup there was a decent personal, lol basically killed sinner here

v/mad

can ya return the favour on this
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...184611&posted=1

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upping 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! these votes are dick rided fuck this battle