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Old 05-09-05, 08:17 PM   #1
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Lightbulb OG freestyle :) check this OUT
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One Step Beyond
D 5 2 3
Os1ris
LFS the Great





Its the spark of illness.... try and split apart the business,
Attempt too? you can hear the beat of ya heart dimenish,
Im just a step away from sickness, I can mark the inches,
Chainsaws leave you seperated and scarred from stitches,
Bitch You couldn't gain green if you stole a cart of spinach,
And thats why I'm ahead of the pack, from start to finish...


I’m hot with these punches like Muhammed Ali’s
That’ll make u sit down like Christopher Reeves
O please, leavin these Mc’s dead and deceased
Look at us, king of RV it’s easy to see
OG’s, Inevitably taking the game to a higher degree
Breakin this shit down more technical then M.I.T
Now watch as Os1ris take this freestyle from me


I'm out ta take it.. fuck status.. half these crews can take the fame-kid
i rather mame-they-bitch, ejaculate my words til she spits the same-shit
"damn Os1ris you insane-kid", yea didn't know the fury was this vicious
and if you missed the hits I'm spittin, how the fuck you gon handle the writtens
and when the words-aint-hittin, you'll know when ya nerves-stop-splittin
Os1ris soaked in illness, even got ya verbs-ta-stop-n-listen.....


Fuck you guys!, I'm takin this "It's mine!" like I was three,
I'm sick wit multis, elementary dear Watson like ABC, 123,
4 5 6, 7 8 and bustin to nine and tenon the drop of a dime,
Mess wit me I'm leavin you floored like the "Sol" of the "Pine",
Closin the door, to open the windows like somebody let a fart,
I never fail, its an oxymoron like copying violence seen in Mario Kart,

OG Production //// 2005
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Old 05-09-05, 08:25 PM   #2
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may wanna pick lighter fonts...hard to read...especially D's verse lol...but ofterwise good freestyles...wait I may be biased...LFS SUCKS! lol...just kidding I'm ok at times lol...okay I'm the Shit lol
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Old 05-09-05, 08:29 PM   #3
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I like that pimpin
That was tight"OG’s, Inevitably taking the game to a higher degree
Breakin this shit down more technical then M.I.T"
^^^That was coo..^^^

tha rest seems personal..I guess U have sum sortah beef!!
explain tha rest..but
tha verses were nice!!

8.2-thats my opinion!!
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lol thx for the feed...i think this was all freestyles lol...nuttin personal really
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Old 05-09-05, 08:35 PM   #5
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:: bump :: upin this shit for some more feedback!
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Old 05-09-05, 08:37 PM   #6
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Quote:
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lol thx for the feed...i think this was all freestyles lol...nuttin personal really



^^^Okay!!..whatevah U say^^^

That shit was nice tho...I wanna see some more
what else yall got together!!
hollah !!
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check my sig for a few lol
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Aiiight fam imma check em out an give sum feed back!!

hollah an be lookin out for sum of my writtens!!
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no doubt...no doubt...oh yeah D drop a link....
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Old 05-09-05, 09:27 PM   #11
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uppin this shit... :: bump ::
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Old 05-10-05, 04:18 PM   #12
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uppin this shittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Old 05-10-05, 04:21 PM   #13
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this was good yall all had some nice flows, and some good bars incorporated in there.
could have used somethin tho.................hmmmm oh yeah...ME haha but its all good

idk why but i really liked this bar
and when the words-aint-hittin, you'll know when ya nerves-stop-splittin
Os1ris soaked in illness, even got ya verbs-ta-stop-n-listen
keep doin ya thing yall...1...
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Old 05-10-05, 04:49 PM   #14
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thanks for the feed! uppin for more
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Old 05-10-05, 04:52 PM   #15
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chyeah...uppin this...sry City...I'll collab wit u later lol....UPPIN!
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