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Old 05-07-05, 09:58 PM   #1
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Another love song for my gurl...Hit the link!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...ctionzmusic.htm
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Old 05-07-05, 09:59 PM   #2
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By the way, I left feed on The Omen's song and KnightShade's song
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Old 05-07-05, 11:35 PM   #3
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Uppin for some feed??!!??!!??!!
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Old 05-08-05, 03:00 AM   #4
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Nice beat..

verse 1: your the only dime i met thats priceless.. wow due.. thats seriously is creative man... nice verse

Chorus: very good chorus.. very emotinoal once agen

verse 2: very good multi's man.. not as creative lines as verse 1

Chours: the chorus in this one is too loud a lil at parts...

overall.. pretty nice song.. im luvin the beat.. lyrics were pretty creative.. but flow was off at some places..

7-8/10
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Old 05-08-05, 01:02 PM   #5
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Weerd thanx for the feed fam...Uppin this shit!!!!

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Old 05-08-05, 07:30 PM   #6
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Can I get some damn feedback on this shit??
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Old 05-08-05, 07:49 PM   #7
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The beat was crack whats the name of it or did you just make it...

lyrics were nice even tho it wasnt the multie massacre shit that was on ya track "Blessed"..this was very emotional and depp as fuck..I could relate to ya shit..Also You sounded low in the first verse then you sound higher in the second
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Old 05-08-05, 08:01 PM   #8
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What you mean by "the beat was crack?" You didnt like it? Lol I made it, but lol whatever...Thanx for the honest feed homeboy...Uppin
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Old 05-08-05, 08:33 PM   #9
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beat:Nice

verse 1: This is aight good lyrics nothin special

Hook: I like this a lot man. shit is nice as hell

Vese 2:Big step up from verse 1. and thats sayin a lot since i liked verse 1

This track was real nice man. I normally wouldve given this a 7 but the second verse bumped it up to an 8.5. this was a real nice emotional track.

can u rtf on my track elevation. stay up man
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Old 05-09-05, 04:01 PM   #10
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Thanx for the feed fam...I will RTF...Uppin this shit!!
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