aight ama do lil keystyle cause am bored and I aint got nuthin to do

aight lets go, you can see me on the street, slappin ma ho´s
like a pimp in the job, drinkin wit ma foes
people dont mess wit cause they know who I am
SNE DAWG the king of the hood, fightin like DefJam
bout ta kick ya punkass if ya beef me
you want the weed then you know where to seek me
but I gotta take a break from all this killin
but first ama make you pray when ya ass leakin
am bored and I 4 that I write ma rhymes
this what I do when I jus get inspired at times
but fuck it am talkin bout beatin asses and makin you cry
doin this thang this is how I get by
mabe jus smoke some weed when am in the mood to fly
so son light that shit, smoke that shit n´pass that shit
SNE DAWG is in the crib to make anotha big hit
dont like it then go n´tell your momma
upps you aint got one, so bring your brother
too much drugs, he jus dead
then you gonna have to bring it yourself
this jus anothakeystyle to make you understand
you cant come beefin wit the SHEEP CLUB band
we tha killaz,dont mess or will murda ya ass
this is it am out to start smokin ma brand new stash

gimme sum feedbacks

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"You Gotta Clean Your Life Before You Begin Your Life, You Dumb Nigga" -2Pac-

SHEEP CLUB 4 EVA

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Keep Votin (Ill RTF)
Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line...

Me Vs Murdz

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...954#post2143954 my link

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"You Gotta Clean Your Life Before You Begin Your Life, You Dumb Nigga" -2Pac-

SHEEP CLUB 4 EVA

<img src="http://www.bestanimations.com/Humans/SkullBones/SkullBones-01.gif">

Keep Votin (Ill RTF)
Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line...

Me Vs Murdz

up your vocab..be/me/fly/by..
thats pre school shit homie....
get off the im so gansta in my hood cliche
its old n played n no1 wants to read gibberish
bout bitches you may or may not have....
get creative in your drops............pz

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

yo I think you should be more creative and be REAL you know...dont talk bout pimpin ho's and what not if u aint doin it...jsut be urself...people wont hate you for that know wat am sayin...