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My Demon Song
IP: 0825 899A
check it...
where do i start, my eyes are tearing apart thinking someones trying to kill me so im staring at cops bearing that hot worry,encased in a boxed fury so i fear when i should not worry-drapped in a locked theory lost mind control in a botched flury chose to patrol my goals but did not hurry ended up losing a portion of soul, its a lot scary i suppose i could grow thru a hole, in this rock query but theres not enuff soil, to fill, this pot belly so was it greed or envy, weed or lust dont know, but the bitch in us showes when we decieve a trust when my brothers bleeding much, will my love appease the God and relieve his gush or will i feel more pain, when i see his leakin has him leavin rushed never believed my touch, could hurt so many without even asking im a demons crutch... and it hurts so heavy when i see him passing i can feel him tackling every atempt at advancing keeping me anxious like im exempt from relaxing i'll try but never fully explain, like a languige that lacks words the fear of lookin over ur shoulder, but not walkin backwards im haunted feed me ur knowledge, but i wont eat unless its a full plate if ur dispensing redemption i'll accept it, but is it too late i know my true face cant deny or fool grace so soon fate will assign my doom to a pool of blue flames burning alive in a room filled to the tomb with my mistakes with every lie i'd change, while my demon stayed the same IT DIDNT EVOLVE OR GET BIGGER BUT I DISSOLVED AND GOT BITTER MY RESOLVE WAS SO WITHERED AT THE SOURCE OF THE RIVER I DIDNT DRINK, LIKE A HORSE AND DIED SORCHED BY THE WINTER IM DEFENSELESS --------------------------------------------------------------------------- thanx 4 reading hope it hit u
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Apollyon
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IP: 3240 794D
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
good creeativity....
good vocab...... not the best but good flow/structure Its a very good song, but I see that you forced rhymes sume times..... it was a good convination of lines, return the favor and rate mines... .......8/10.........
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