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View Poll Results: Cormax vs Murdz
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Old 06-05-05, 07:18 AM   #1
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Cormax vs Murdz

IP: B5AE 7642

Topical Battle Rules:

16 - 18 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Topic : " Whirlwind of pain ".

g/l Murdz.

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Old 06-05-05, 07:19 AM   #2
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Cormax has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 07:19 AM.
 
Old 06-05-05, 07:19 AM   #3
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Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 07:19 AM.
 
Old 06-05-05, 07:21 AM   #4
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yo muthafucka i neva said no 5 hour drop.. its 10:30pm and i got exams tommorow... i gotta go.. thats bullshit...
 
Old 06-05-05, 07:31 AM   #5
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What a idiot, I said I only had time for a quick battle hence the 16 to 18 line limit. Plus why didn't you read the rules properly asshole.
 
Old 06-05-05, 08:04 AM   #6
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" Whirlwind of pain "

Can't help but try to fend for myself, hurt on the assualt.
Everytime I recover, another evil uprises, spreads & revolts.
Bolts of my mind, twisting loose losing focus & sweet sanity.
Quality of life is drawn to misfortune, upon me & my family.
What can I do to stop the pain? Utilize myself as a human shield.
But, I've already been riddled with death & disease, maybe I won't appeal.
Torturing my thoughts is what the sharp personality of hurt brings.
Collisions of hope & anguish clash, crimson visions make my heart cringe.
Serenity is what I yearn, frantic whispers taunt the air.
But, I crave for the day the world of hurt commences, & I just don't care.
Leave my pride spare, combat this emotion with a determined glare.
Emotions caving in, I'm still standing strong warning off this terror.
Until time becomes worthless, and plays a role in pointless endeavours.
Head kept stable by the balance, of fading away due to peril.
Grasping onto that one unit of belief, depriving me of morphing mental.
Vaguely keeping sane, but malicy has embedded itself upon my brain.
But I can't keep composure, whilst floundering in this whirlwind of pain
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