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Old 05-17-05, 07:28 PM   #1
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Quick Shit Rite Here



Nigga Move Bacc Cuz The Tray Pound I'll Lay A Nigga Flat
And Ace Keep It Cocked Bacc
Lean'n To Tha Side
Khakis Creased,Im Down To Low-Ride
Puttin In Work Wit Tha Steel,Comptons Bacc Nigga
The Game Drop Bombs So I Gotta Squeeze Quicka
Let Them Niggaz Bleed,Dis Iz Rhythem And Gangsta
Call Me Cock Diesal Cuz These Biceps Iz Like A 16 Loaded Tanka
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Old 05-17-05, 08:03 PM   #2
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It was easy styll, buh i wanna see ur shyt in full if u know wht im sayin
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Old 05-17-05, 08:49 PM   #3
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yea i feel you nigka,uppin this for some feedbacc
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Old 05-17-05, 10:27 PM   #4
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umm that was basic...elevate wit different wordplay, better structure and more vocab...return the favor on the links in my sig
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Old 05-17-05, 10:34 PM   #5
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Aw shit
I see dis site iz another "Basic" piece of shit were if you dont use 18 Syllable Words ur garbage
Uppin dis for feedbacc
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Old 05-17-05, 10:41 PM   #6
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no but everything you said has been said or didnt sound good....hence "basic"...be more creative...hell it didnt even rhyme half of the time
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Old 05-17-05, 11:11 PM   #7
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this was not good but no bad it was ehhh work on ya shit elevate its cool we all had to do it work on vocab wordplay metaphores structre and all that shit keep doin ya thing
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please return the favor in my open mic link in my sig
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Old 05-18-05, 12:10 AM   #8
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i appreciate da feedbacc but why iz dat nigkaz in da street iz lovin dis verse?
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Old 05-18-05, 12:49 AM   #9
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Ah this was really basic , nothing really special
nothing i havent seen before , read some tutorils ,
use beter worplay , and vocab ,
use hot punchlines and , try to use metaphors
it'll make your verse, hot ..overall keep it up

and drop a link!
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Old 05-18-05, 01:32 AM   #10
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thanx,uppin dis for feedbacc
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