Dope poem, Featured for a week~FLUID

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This Is A Long As Poem But Defintaly Worth The Read The Emotion Is Good Imagery Is Perfection Vocab Well Your Vocabs Always Top This Is A Real Dope Drop Im Really Feeling This All Throughout Some Real Dope Lines The Length Kinda Makes You Get Bored But Your Able To Pull The Reader Back In As Usual Dope Drop Homie 8.5/10

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

thanks 4 tha feed John lol....bump.......

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Aiight aiight, nice vocab, the imaginary of this verse was good. You had spelling erro'z, but i'm too lazy to tell ya. The emotion of this verse was neh, ok, but i wanted to see more yo. You came in a good angle, originality, matter of fact. All i gots to say iz, this a deep good verse here, man, stay up....

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not all poetry has 2 b a reflection of emotion.....especially when my drop is focused on making a concious description of a process....the poem centers around metaphor and imagery, desribin how in my eyes teardrops r always shed and how they are expressed..thered b hella emotion if i was describin sum1 crying instance....but i aint! lol, thanks 4 da feed fam

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bump...........................

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Strongest aspect of your piece was the imagery without a doubt and also how you defined those teardrops in various ways. The vocabulary was excellent as usual but I love how your words never affect the content of the poem or the message you want to convert. This isn't an emotional type of poem but more of an insightful one and you really brought your top game when it comes to the deeper lines. Made me stop and think about some things here and there. I love reading your pieces due to your writing style, even though it was a long read you managed to keep the readers focussed thanks to your vivid way of description.

Nice piece fam

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This piece was really interesting because you held me with the metaphors. Plus, it was a variant since you were talking about a cycle. Good imagery, vocabulary was on point cos you didnt overload & spoil the content with it.
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Please could you rtf in my sig.

wow!

dope shit, meat's like crazy. originality held this on lock for you fam.

Nice man. I liked the way your poem was worded. Was easy to understand. I iked the quote and the addition of you giving the meaning. Very nice. I would mind elevating off your poems but I'm a good poet. The best way to become the best is to do it on your own. hell thats a quote by me.lol. Just keep up the good work. I will read your poems now. They are very creative and very decisive. Keep that shit coming bruh.

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wow, love the metaphors, some deep concepts and you seemed to have fun playing with your vocabulary, this is a very well thought out poem, i enjoyed reading this..1

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

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word, very deep material right here....some really great lines in there, put alot of thought into this and it shows, good vocab and you use it very effectively...just loved the whole idea of the topic and how you let it roll out, good stuff man

keep up

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oh yeah, rtf if ya could, when you get time

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