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Old 05-22-05, 02:24 PM   #1
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Non Capisco vs mizz fyre

IP: CF4E 8780

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topic: Escaping Abuse


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Old 05-22-05, 11:37 PM   #2
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Non Capisco has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 11:37 PM.
 
Old 05-22-05, 11:40 PM   #3
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"Topic: Escaping Abuse"
like needles on her skin his touch graZes her caressing in a sadistic manner
she stands afraid yet gathered closing her eyes as slowly he "scans her"
he hand feels her from the inside out as he says "..... he's tickling her tummy"
inside her he moves like a parasite , thick. She whispers "please just kill me"
he sends her to the bathroom she takes a cold shower for a hour collecting
thoughts of how she can get away with out upsetting him or resurrecting
his pass demons of which she blames for all of the strife and physical abuse
but what kills her the most is when he pauses and mouths subtle "i love yous"
while she gives him brain he can't help but think of his sister doing the same
so the cycle just continues but she has figured out he is going legally insane
she can't help but cringe every time he whispers her first and middle name
he grabs her hair and pulls her close telling her you've acquired Head Fame
she goes down pubes up her nose as she squeezes her teeth she hears him scream
jumping up blood on her face , penis down her throat there is a mix of red and cream
he sits there in a state of shock. she stands up pulls a gun out ready and cocked
spits out the "erect" as she points the special he tries to talk "FUCK YOU DON'T SPEAK"
tears running down her face she's shaking he just sits there screaming and yelling
"YOU FUCKING DUMB BITCH" she stands there swaying side to side dwelling
revolver even though heavy she feels the rows in the grip as her reach slowly grows it
she points it up . "i just want you to know..." she concludes her sentence with a bullet
watching as he slumps into his chair. brains splatter all over the back once white wall
she stand there and sobs a bit takes the gun and points the gun to her eye ball
whispering how she is finally relieved and saved she pulls the trigger, a matching ceiling
body collapsed followed by cop car lights and old men who could never really hide the feeling
"god she was pretty"

"funerals come and funerals go poor little hoe looking for a home finally had enough
walking through this cluster of individuals the girl escaped abuse , eluding hand cuffs
taking matters into her own hands she figured finally she had come clean and reached
breaking point, so go little girl get your wings and run amongst the clouds you breached"


yea umm i'm a lil freaked out i wrote this but what ever.. ha good luck MF
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Old 05-24-05, 05:23 PM   #4
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mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 05:23 PM.
 
 


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