Pen or Poet? (quick piece)

If you were but a poet
And I were but your pen
Enjoined in weaving tapestries
Please tell me, now, what then
Could we write our destiny
The poet and the pen
Embellish all our fantasies
Find love time and again

Would we sail the seven seas
To find the pirates lair
Or ride upon the noblest steeds
Pluck stars out of the air
Could we fathom ocean’s depths
Explore the coral reefs
Climb Tibetan mountain peaks
Hold firm in our beliefs

Or simply with the sands of time
Would all my ink run dry
Would you release me from your hands
Put down your head and sigh
Would we close our chapter
Would all our dreams be lost
Would all the pages then go blank
As white as winter’s frost

Would we simply be no more
The poet or the pen
Would your muse then lose her voice
To never sing again
But if we wrote our ending
Seems despite the best laid schemes
We’d somehow find each other
If only in our dreams

psst.. I do not wanna get kicked out for inactiveness..
Key'd.
Uppin..

some of the dopest shit i ever read on this site,makes my job worthwhile~FLUID

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you sure you wrote this i should goggle it........................anyways this is amzingly dope nice imagery dope wordplay usage good vocab just enough this is a really really good piece very imganitive good way to relate your love to a female nice all around i can say nothing at all bad about this poem it should be stickeyed

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yeah, this was coo....really enjoyed the imagery in this one, very imaginitive...all around great piece, nice tone to it, perfect flow....word word, sticky this, this was a great read

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(LoL) funny.. really funny!

How does it get stickeyed?
Andway.. yeah.. thankx.. everyone drop a link if you want feedback..
upPin..

Sweft

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Calme yo aquÃ- deberé aliviar su tensión. Gocé este poema. imágenes estaban en el punto. vocab trabajó perfectamente. la estructura era agradable también. muy creador. debe obtener representado la semana próxima con el poema que estoy a punto de dejar de caer.

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Gracias. Goce tambien a sus escritores el poema bloqueado. Quiero trabajar en un poema con usted.

Any more feed-back?

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this was a good piece, a very good one....i couldn't ever think of a topic like that....the imagery was there....the emoton....i mean it all went together well....and i also liked your rhyme scheme.....like C.AL.I. said it should be stickied...i will read the other thing later butnow i'm tired so i am goin for a nap lol....and it's nice to see someone religious on this site.....

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i like the imagery and the emotio nyou poured into this.
vocabulary was decent, and the the flow didn't fall off.
overall, i'd give this a 7/10.

word, thanks guys drop links and Ill give feed back..
RV respect heehee
Sweft

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189988

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Dman sweft, your poems are dope as fuck!!! Thats why you repping TC bro!


upping for this..
mod sticky it.

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word of Prey, left comment..
Thank You
The Council.
HaHa what alais are you..
Sweft

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yes, this was very well written, nice imagery...and this seemed to be a free verse also, this was one of the dopest poems i ever read on this site..and the pen will always be there...1

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thank you floodman. uppin this

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