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Word @ me uploading this hehe

Very nice track right here, beat is dope especially with the hook on it. Concept allows you to bring it in a emotional, poetic sort of way which you also did. Had your flow on lock, vocabulary was excellent. Strong emotion, raw and pure and something ladies can really relate to I think. The ending was amazing in my opinion and some seperate lines really stuck to my head.

"cause the higher she got, was the less she had to feel"

but enslaved by his ways, so called love was her haze
12 roses, long stemmed leaning up against her grave
its another sad ending that couldve been saved
^some of my favo lines

Keep it up gurl, you always drop HOT audios!

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aight im bout to listen to this...flow is straight...lyrics...is pretty good..i like the laid back vibe of the track...damn..lol..second verse is louder then the first verse...make the first verse the same volume as this one...overall...its a good track..at the end..u shoulda let it fade out tho...

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word uppin for my nigga bitch!.lol. nice track ma..solid ass topic deep like ya said..get at me on Aim .lol

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damn u told me bout this track over AIM....and im feelin it, da beat is nice...the main thing im feelin bout dis track is da lyrics...damn wid ur slow flow on this i can hear it all and its deep gal on that realness aswell...deinently showin a different side 2 u wid this track bein able 2 come wid a meaningful track..ur quality is coo and there arent any major technical issues wid it...ur flow i son point...what i can i say, i dloaded dos track... keep em comin

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Typing as I listen...I love this beat an the sample on hook....flow is on point....ya quality is upped alot...I like ya delivery to....I think u shoulda followed that drum in the beat tho when it went "b-b-b-b-b-boom"..it'd be iller if ya lyrics went right wit it when it looped...but nonetheless it was still ill....the story is ill.........I love your imagery...you painting a picture with a words...I could feel where u were comign from an I could see the story as it unfolded..good drop.....7/10......1

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Beats dope..flow is doope....If it isnt custom where you get this beat....

1st Verse - Flow is dope.intro to the story is nice ass fuck...

2nd - Nice contination, same ass first all you need to learn to do is use multies

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uppin............................................. ....... for ms. LV................................................ .. UP!

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hmm.. thats weird lol.. i dropped a freeverse on this a while back.. thought i recognized the title lol.. aight.. leme check you out..



first verse - im feelin the flow a lil bit.. strait.. you got reall deep real fast.. im feelin it tho..

lyrics were pretty good ma.. for real.. flow is fire too.. delivery could be a lil better.. but u doin ya thang for real... .. keep droppin ma..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

beat is koo
quality aint bad at all
you had a good flow on this, delevery was decent too
dubs were good volume, not too loud
some of the lyrics were basic but some just had basic concepts used differently.
sample is good in the chorus

onlything for vocals is maybe like a Desser, the sh, ch sounds kinda hurt every now and then, but there aint too many

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

this beat is very abstract so to say. nice story, flow is decent.. quality sounds really good as well. your delivery needs work but you pretty good from what i hear on this track.

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