|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-25-05, 05:58 AM
|
#1
|
|||||
|
Ka.Nek.ShuN
|
Gone With Bullets...
IP: A7AC EBEC
ayo... Listen to this, shit ain't a tale! We were only chilling lookin' for stuff to buy at a garage sale. Thats when I noticed some (real) gangstas were there, I kept my distance cuz I didn't dare. A car pulled up you could tell from my eyes I was scared. They started shooting and my brother (in the crossfire) got shot! I felt like my life just stop!...... Ayo dont fucking think I'm playing with this shit... I'm About to put my heart into these lines.. Of my brother and my hunga ta shine... On my tracks I seam ferousous when at the same time I feel like ending my life from a deadly dossage. My brothers death is what taught me what dope-is, you have no idea how hard it is to cope-with! Why I gota be hurtin'? I only wish I was another person! As I live my life worsin' Ta live I rap and play ball... Never stop going n going day-night in the coutyard... Killin' him was like rippin out my courpse-scar me fo' life mentaly, phisical, and emotionly... If only I woulda been paying attension more closely, Jumped front of the bullet when they fired there altilery.. Dont you see fo' you I would swim the seven seas, I would Burn ta hell or even freeze! I would plee ta your killers kiss there feet on my knees, praying ta god that they accept me plee allow your free minded spirit run free... Ta get you back I would go to jail ta kill those Gs, or give up my life standing there with out shacking looking into the gunpoint! Waiting ta see you in heaven, giving up my life 12, without no escape, knowing I'm bout to die n it's already to late.... To them it's only logic if no1 die from there clique....[this line was taken from nas] This niga sick, if I could I would get my brother back and clap those otha nigas quick, firts ta make em feel my pain shop off there dick!.......... When It came to life we could both relate, now I only wish you would reawake, cuz I feel that everything was my mistake.. Now every night when I go to bed I pray to God that you could be here reliving.. Living the life we use to have, you were the one that kept me from sinning... I was there when you dieded I was thinking you were to fly ta die! Thats when I realized you werent and begun to cry Now every day I look to da sky, say yo wasup god and why? WHy was he the one that had to die!
__________________
.::BattleZ::. |
|||||
|
|
05-25-05, 06:59 AM
|
#2
|
||||||
|
Middle Weight
|
IP: DEEC 8168
Deep words murdz and sorry bout ya bro dyin.
|
||||||
|
|
|
05-25-05, 07:27 AM
|
#3
|
|||||
|
Ka.Nek.ShuN
|
IP: A7AC EBEC
yeah it was a while ago but i been workin on this.. thanks mayne... first time i realli mentioned it...
__________________
.::BattleZ::. |
|||||
|
|
|
05-25-05, 07:47 AM
|
#4
|
|||
|
**the council**
|
IP: 1B87 3E3D
i think the strongest aspect of this piece was the emotion, i could really sense the pain that you felt over your brothers death, the structure was a lil off and that meant that it didn't flow as well as it could have but that didn't matter coz the emotion and imagery pulled it off a nice drop...............
__________________
  |
|||
|
|
|
05-25-05, 12:26 PM
|
#5
|
|||||
|
New to RV
|
IP: 7F08 083F
damn man, this was deep, really deep emotions, sorry about your bro, but this was good, flow was ok, shaky at times, good vocab, its just really deep and emotional, i like it...
__________________
[CENTER][FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=4]White Society |
|||||
 
|
|
|
05-25-05, 12:50 PM
|
#6
|
||||
|
IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Need a link homie , or this will be closed
__________________
The Competition
 |
||||
|
|
|
05-26-05, 04:13 AM
|
#7
|
|||||
|
Ka.Nek.ShuN
|
IP: A7AC EBEC
__________________
.::BattleZ::. |
|||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
