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06-01-05, 08:15 PM | #1 | ||||
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Head Trips
IP: D92C 0475
I stand with feeling cold, hair stands up and shaking Ligaments
Vision spins and once again I see distorted Pigments I feel nausea, dizzy as I fall to the Asphault Get up and take Blow To The dome but I aint taking about Assault Already tripping and about to take another One Rip apart the pieces and put another green tablet to my Tongue Mouth goes numb and feeling like I got Lead Lips Falling on my face, lets just say Im on Head Trips I got a Dead Grip, on these oxys and I aint Lettin Go Holler back later when you see me next time at my Funeral Take a hit of the green as smoke slowly fills the Room Getting high as hell as you break up ya herbs and Shrooms But it all comes to an end when you gain concienceness Again Wake up with aching pains in the backyard of A Friends |
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06-01-05, 08:56 PM | #2 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: D92C 0475
Uppin for some detailed feedback
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06-01-05, 09:13 PM | #3 | |||
Do Re Mi
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IP: F974 6254
the breakdown ....
I stand with feeling cold, hair stands up and shaking Ligaments Vision spins and once again I see distorted Pigments nice multis wit ligaments and vision spins I feel nausea, dizzy as I fall to the Asphault Get up and take Blow To The dome but I aint taking about Assault i like the idea to this line but the rhyme jus wasnt there Already tripping and about to take another One Rip apart the pieces and put another green tablet to my Tongue niice niice.. kinda simple compared to the others, but it works Mouth goes numb and feeling like I got Lead Lips Falling on my face, lets just say Im on Head Trips this one i like, sounds like the hook to the whole thing, good rhyme I got a Dead Grip, on these oxys and I aint Lettin Go Holler back later when you see me next time at my Funeral i like this one two, nice multi to tie it in with tha last bar Take a hit of the green as smoke slowly fills the Room Getting high as hell as you break up ya herbs and Shrooms pretty good, simple again, but good But it all comes to an end when you gain concienceness Again Wake up with aching pains in the backyard of A Friends ok.. not so good, this was a pretty good rhyme but the ending was weak overall - 6/10 return tha favor on any of my open mics. i got like 3-4.. peace1
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06-01-05, 09:27 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: D92C 0475
It was meant to be simple. The entire piece was imagery.
Anyway, Uppin |
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06-02-05, 08:06 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Hello mr climax
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06-02-05, 03:23 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: D92C 0475
....And you are?
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