RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases > Poetic Scriptures
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 05-13-05, 04:53 PM   #1
Typical
Apollyon
 
Typical's Avatar
 
Posts: 886
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
My Demon Song

IP: 0825 899A

check it...


where do i start, my eyes are tearing apart
thinking someones trying to kill me so im staring at cops
bearing that hot worry,encased in a boxed fury
so i fear when i should not worry-drapped in a locked theory
lost mind control in a botched flury
chose to patrol my goals but did not hurry
ended up losing a portion of soul, its a lot scary
i suppose i could grow thru a hole, in this rock query
but theres not enuff soil, to fill, this pot belly
so was it greed or envy, weed or lust
dont know, but the bitch in us showes when we decieve a trust
when my brothers bleeding much, will my love appease the God and relieve his gush
or will i feel more pain, when i see his leakin has him leavin rushed
never believed my touch, could hurt so many without even asking
im a demons crutch... and it hurts so heavy when i see him passing
i can feel him tackling every atempt at advancing
keeping me anxious like im exempt from relaxing
i'll try
but never fully explain, like a languige that lacks words
the fear of lookin over ur shoulder, but not walkin backwards
im haunted
feed me ur knowledge, but i wont eat unless its a full plate
if ur dispensing redemption i'll exept it, but is it too late
i know my true face cant deny or fool grace
so soon fate will assign my doom to a pool of blue flames
burning alive in a room filled to the tomb with my mistakes

with every lie i'd change, while my demon stayed the same

IT DIDNT EVOLVE OR GET BIGGER BUT I DISSOLVED AND GOT BITTER
MY RESOLVE WAS SO WITHERED AT THE SOURCE OF THE RIVER
I DIDNT DRINK, LIKE A HORSE AND DIED SORCHED BY THE WINTER

IM DEFENSELESS

Featured for a week, ahh, this was dope~FLUID
---------------------------------------------------------------------------


thanx 4 reading
hope it hit u
__________________

Last edited by fluidmoon : 05-18-05 at 10:13 PM.
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-13-05, 04:58 PM   #2
Typical
Apollyon
 
Typical's Avatar
 
Posts: 886
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 0825 899A

i made a mistake...
...
if ur dispensing redemption i'll *exept* it, but is it too late

correction...
...
if ur dispensing redemption i'll *accept* it, but is it too late
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-13-05, 09:44 PM   #3
Typical
Apollyon
 
Typical's Avatar
 
Posts: 886
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 3240 794D

feedback.......................................... .........................
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 05-16-05, 08:36 PM   #4
fluidmoon
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
 
fluidmoon's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,183
Joined: Jun 2004
From: NEW YORK
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 2-0
IP: 3240 794D

ahhh, that shit was so hott though.........wow, your vocabulary shined in this man, i'ma sticky this till i get sick of this..ahh..lol
__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*
  Reply With Quote
Old 06-09-05, 07:46 PM   #5
Typical
Apollyon
 
Typical's Avatar
 
Posts: 886
Joined: Aug 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 28AD 5545

thanm\x for the love...much respect
cant believe i got featured...
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:14 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.