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05-24-05, 01:10 AM
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Same Man ..A OG Cypher with/OSB
IP: F519 0F67
i'm the man who put his boot on the moon and saw the universe but i'm the same man going mach 5 falling towards the earth i'm the man who made a life for my kid before his birth but im the same man who smokes black and milds around my wifes girth i'm the man in the white house that you all see as sickenin but i'm the same man how doesn't pay for a cent of what hes livin in i'm the man expressing my thoughts from a religious perspective, but im the same man who takes your money that i say "god collective" I'm the man who vents out his anger by beating his wife but i'm the same man now going to jail and prolly be in for life I'm the man whos death would be forgotten and not mourned But i'm the same man who knew the earth's demise and left you forewarned I'm the man whos rise to the top came with hard work and tears But i'm the same man whose name will be remembered for years I'm the same whos on top of the world looking down on the ants But im the same guy who goes to a Knicks game and constantly chants I'm the guy who lives everyday blind waiting for my sight to come back But the same guy who never had to deal with fights or dumb crap I'm the guy whos constantly questioned and never took seriously But im the same guy whos answers are fake and hides the truth mysteriously and the list goes on... cause my name is glorified, i swept the sea and torched the skies and when tears poured at night the next morning i'd love myself more than life but i'm sure in time i will be gone because i worship myself and my father always told me i shouldn't break the commandments so i guess i'm going to hell cause i'm that man who grew up with love but was consumed by hate so forgive father for i am sin, the human race the day i found myself. Red - Os1ris Navy - OSB 
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05-24-05, 03:36 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
don't forget a link....
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05-24-05, 04:24 PM
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i didnt know onestep was a mod?
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05-24-05, 04:39 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
onestep isn't a mod... i was just telling him...
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05-25-05, 12:50 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
uppin...........
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05-25-05, 04:19 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Damn...dope ass piece right here, real deep
I like tha concept...this is actually a new one to me...I really enjoyed reading this piece and hope to see more like it. Favorite Lines: so i guess i'm going to hell cause i'm that man who grew up with love but was consumed by hate so forgive father for i am sin, the human race Overall 9/10 (jus cuz tha flow was a lil choppy in some places) |
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05-25-05, 04:19 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
RTF on one of tha links in tha sig
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05-27-05, 06:20 PM
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[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: F519 0F67
Thanks for the feedback H i got you on some feedback
Heres my feed link http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2179514
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