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05-30-05, 12:32 PM | #1 | ||||||
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You got me
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m.c lub
e.c left feed on there tracks new track feed is really aprecated if you give me some feed ill get back and leave it on yours http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/jnyceus_music.htm ^^^^^ |
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05-30-05, 01:08 PM | #2 | ||||||
20/20 VisioN
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IP: 8584 6B8D
beat is koo
quaily is bad, ur vocals need to be upped and u have no mic presence, like u afraid of the mic. Flow is average, lyrics are ok, nothig special emotion needs to be upped in certain spots, delevery needs work Chorus wif samples and all dat is koo 2nd verse, same as 1st practice ur timing, delevery and lyrics
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05-30-05, 01:54 PM | #3 | |||||||
tha illest
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lol u ever heard of k-nice? i dont really like these kind of beats, flow seems forced but some good emotion f sho, lyrics i dnt like at all... the let me go part was gay to me but u got a road ahead of you ull end up aight if u keep at it... 2nd verse was terrible flow wise it seems like u rushed the whole way through.... i wasnt really feelin this, peep my track if u would return tha favor.. .good luck1
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05-30-05, 07:31 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 9845 8F66
thanks for the feedback i apreacate it...uppin
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05-31-05, 04:26 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 9845 8F66
aright good feeback thanks man...uppin
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05-31-05, 09:32 PM | #6 | ||||
Aiming for Heads
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IP: 3240 794D
beat is like a Will Smith type....flow is good...delviery is good...sample fits perfectly...I dont know what they were tlaking about..
But ya lyrics suck its only for club shit
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