Battle Rules:

ulimited bars - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
ill go first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 05:29 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

N.E.T has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 05:30 PM.

Don’t start jew, you can’t fight the clip//
You aint got teeth so you cant bite my shit//
Or it might break your jaw or infect your cells//
Remove your organs and place your heart next to shells//
So when you test the shell you gone rest in hell//
Fuck Satan, im the red devil of earth//
I got words instead of horns that cherish your shirt//
And shell cases that infect the dirt//
With your blood all over it, that means your life not worth//
Leave your famous then dead, just like the Hendrix star//
But really your pointless, just like your appendix are//

jewpride has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-04 07:54 PM.

this dudes flow is very brutal i cause hazards nuke growths and reduce flows until its numero uno you know/ young pride the hammas speak annualy and this bitch N.E.T is just restless to come battle me/naturally/ ill murk this dude leave him hung with a lynched appearance/ amputate his arms so that way he couldnt lift his spirits (KO)/ you cant match my rap ability/you from nc me from philly/ thats where i get my credibility/ you've no consistency your condition is dry/ your lyrics are rusted so how are you depicted to shine/ rumor has it your a loser bastard who uses average words you'll get served and maneuver backwards/ im through wit actors you chose the wrong script get ya throat slit so you wont spit/ ya lines are hopeless i've misleaded your dreams/ like elementary math tests your defeated wit ease

you good battle net...we need some votes though. i think this shit gonna be close

Voted For: jewpride

my vote goes to jewpride

N.E.T- It was a decent verse but ya rhymes seemed to fall off a lil for me. Some decent punches but could be elevated and made better. Decent flow and a little bit of wordplay but not enough. ITs was an ok verse though

Jewpride- Another ok verse. Structures wank, sort that shit out but your multi's and punches made up for that. Flow was aight too. Just change your structure and your verse will flow better. My vote goes to you for the multi's and a few stronger punches

very close battle, good dstuff

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sorry about the way i structure my shit. if you saw it how i look at it it wouldnt make sense to make it into more lines...next battle ill work on it though..thanks for the vote

yo net do me a favor...i saw you voted for me but they disqualified it. go back read the thread and hook me up wit your vote, you know i deserve a win against that bitch

Voted For: jewpride

Aight, JEW Ya Got My VOTE....

Weak Battle Thgo, Both Need To STEP IT UP..
Hit Harder, Mix Ya Style...Have Humour n Get Personal @ The Same Time....

JEW Ya Structure Was Poor, But After Readin It A Couple Times Ya Rhymes n Wordplay Was Better Than N.E.T's...

N.E.T...Use Punches, An Make Them Humouress n You Wouldda Merked Jew, Your OKAY N.E.T, You Juss Need To ELEVATE Next Time.....

Good Lookin My Nigguhz, Keep Up The Rhymin'

Return The Favor n Vote On My OPEN BATTLES

P E A C E

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I think jewpride got it.

He had more heavy punches, the flow was a little better not too simple, and put together nicely.

This was hot
"/ ill murk this dude leave him hung with a lynched appearance/ amputate his arms so that way he couldnt lift his spirits (KO)"
and
"ya lines are hopeless i've misleaded your dreams/ like elementary math tests your defeated wit ease"

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Turnheads Vs CODEE [5-1]
Me clownin Nomercy

Voted For: N.E.T

YO JEW PRIDE U MIGHT HAD MORE WORDS DAN N.E.T BUT HE STILL RIPPED U

NET NICE MAYNE U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE STRUTURE

JEW-PRIDE NICE FLOW BUT YO STRUTURE WAS LACK IT WAS HARD FOR ME TO READ THOUGH/ YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARD DAN N.E.T

N.E.T KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK MAYNE NICE VERSE FROM BOTH OF YALL//

N.E.T RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN DA SIG MAYNE

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

that was hot im feeln this battle for real but jew was hot to and i wish i could vote but n-e-way n.e.t i wanna battle u

Voted For: N.E.T

lol what was the other guy doing i couldetn read his stucture is so bad to many/ lol plus net cam with vocab and metas
v/ net
return the favour in one of the battles in my sig