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06-05-05, 07:08 PM | #1 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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What The Fuck!!!!???
IP: 8E7F 1337
fuck whats happenin i need a bitch slappin again
now i'm running round malls raping every manicin everybodies panicking once i do my wack singing i bout 2 get banned again while this track spinnin noww i started a fuckin riot that is still unhandled im just laying here getting krippled and trampled bitches are always fuckin wit my big dick N' balls i'm running slamming my head against brick walls along the people wit the thick skulls and big balls get the drugz in my body wit a syringe N' spoon while i'm winking n' jacking off in an engine room im thinking bout singin soon in the women's room my rhymes will hit u without warnin in the mornin as if it was global warming cuz they never boring u'll be ignoring me dancin naked when its pouring and now my damn face up in the Journal Sentinel my burnin internal's unintensionable& unmentionable and every word'll hit you hard in this instrumental it got you feeling so fucking intensive and mental too the fuckin point too where it's unpreventable becuz putting out wack shit is just wrong like me wearing a fuckin bra and thong it just to hard to beleive ina human being in a green G-string wearin pants & peeing a living man-whore in person and breathin fuck what you just heard read what u seein i grew up before but im growing down this time i fell down a flight of steps & cracked my spine now im walkin like frankenstein but im doin fine bring ur vodka and beer what....im drinkin mine i got satellites so i could see hermanphrodytes went 2 school 2 just start fights breakin lights soo i went on a field trip got some spider bites got superpowers beating on wimps n' cowards sent 'em 2 the hospital along wit some flowers got in the girls showers & winked with powders every kid'll get sent 2 the muthafuckin hospital the wackest........ Straight Aim right back at it jackin off in the damn attic anotha crak addict about had it ur rhymes bore us ur hoes adore us all of yall ignore us fuck i forgot the damn chorus becuz putting out wack shit is just wrong like me wearing a fuckin bra and thong it just to hard to beleive ina human being in a green G-string wearin pants & peeing a living man-whore in person and breathin fuck what you just heard read what u seein |
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06-05-05, 07:33 PM | #2 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 8E7F 1337
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193866
there my link |
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06-05-05, 07:42 PM | #3 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
iight not bad, structure is obviously very good, ur vocab not a problem...but see, u have to many basic lines....u gutta kick it up a notch mayne fo real.....nice piece overall but u needa enhance those rhymes.....multi's 7/10 overall 8/10 keep elevatin mayne
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06-05-05, 10:40 PM | #4 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: AE6D 1D7D
aight uppin a lil more
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06-06-05, 11:57 AM | #5 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: AE6D 1D7D
..uppin...is open mics useless these dayz or sumthin???? i'll return the fav if u give me some feed
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06-06-05, 05:54 PM | #6 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: ECB3 36A0
whoa structure as even as a ---------------- man nice flow good piece elevate more dawg but flow is there now...
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06-07-05, 05:53 AM | #7 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: AE6D 1D7D
uppin.............
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06-08-05, 12:48 PM | #8 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: AE6D 1D7D
uppin!!!..........
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06-08-05, 12:57 PM | #9 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
flow was on point, but yo lyrics werent that strong homie. Elevate a lil more. but I see you worked on ya structure and flow, just keep workin. Nice piece. just a lil bit stronger and creative concepts.
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06-08-05, 01:34 PM | #10 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: AE6D 1D7D
aight thanx for the feed
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06-08-05, 04:32 PM | #11 | |||
Do Re Mi
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IP: F974 6254
ayyo no hate... but i wasnt feelin this, the rhymes was kinda random, but the multis was right on, and the structure was dead on... 5 or 6 out of 10.. elevate mayne, peaCe.1
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