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Old 06-06-05, 08:29 PM   #1
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I elevated please check this please

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...tions_music.htm

i think i did lyricly on audio...flow and all, sorry for the quality i didnt fix it,,,i will for the audio tourny tho...anyway check it and leave feed

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2199345ΒΈ
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193178

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Old 06-06-05, 08:35 PM   #2
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iight uppin..;.
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Old 06-07-05, 03:46 AM   #3
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aight yo your right you did elevate..

you need to write like atleast a verse a day.....and freestyle so that you can find a style becuase the one you have now is wack...

also you need to have more emotions....right now you might think you have emotion but you dont...once you find yourself and get more comfortable behind the mic then you will see what i mean
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Old 06-07-05, 07:34 AM   #4
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yeah thanks i very apreciate it man
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Old 06-07-05, 05:17 PM   #5
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Lyrical wise u elevated

quality wise we all havin difficulties in that area. work on emotions....on ya flow...i dont kno if u changed up yo style or not cuz i havent listen to yo stuff before.

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Old 06-07-05, 07:14 PM   #6
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i heard life...liked the beat mos def....flow needs work damn this was short as hell lol it just stopped lol...emotion is nonexistent..u need work on that...some words u just mumble work on your pronunciation.1.
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