DISS TO SICK ONE

Have no lyrical truthj even with a miracle roof couldn’t
Stop black rain from hitting your whack brain I wouldn’t
Talk loud or walk proud even with a bulk crowd no one applauds
You, wear clothes deep red just a freak misled like a lost child broad
With a false style a fraud belong on milk cartons your girl get silk pardons
Like galore whores on street strips, your unique script is garbage starting
With your rhymes farting at doors blind begging for food
Best dodge this surprise you not large in size like a oak tree
Therefore you can’t smoke me just big joke G I’m like Stokeley
Carmichael I burn baby burn when will the crazy learn manners?
You filthy and not digging me plus guilty of bigamy like bandana
Thug with two wives can’t live true lives I’m like Carlos Santanna
Got a black magic Woman while you just a whack tragic omen

Flow Wuz Iight, Few Decent Linez, Need 2 Be More Creative Wit'cha Wordplay & a Few Linez Wuz Crazy Stretched Dawg, Try Getting 2 Da Point Quicker, Not A Bad Diss Yo, I Seen Worse 6.5/10

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ok a nice diss here not too many punches so just work on the delivery to those punches u had a good flow and this loine below was good man thats the one i mostly liked
"With a false style a fraud belong on milk cartons your girl get silk pardons
Like galore whores on street strips, your unique script is garbage starting"
very good diss here just work more on ur delivery to punches so u can pack more damage u kno good job give this a 6.5/10

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thanks for the peeps and the props maybe this may make sick one realize I'm better than what i get credit for

yo mayne ur shit is corny and will always be corny u got no talent and u should just disconnect ya keyboard.......u wanna throw disses out like that.......u beetta come strong homey...ima newb and ill rip u kid.......dissen my boi like that........u got NOTHEN HOLLA ATCHA BOY

P.R.E.P. I'll rip your heart out and feed it to you just letr me know when you're ready

^^ dont get madrapper started.........

hes lyrically better.........

in a battle u might chew on more then a mouth-full........

maaaddddraaapppperrrrrr...
co0omee ouuttt aaannddd pllaayyyyyy .. hahahaha

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