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Old 06-08-05, 08:24 PM   #1
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Old 06-08-05, 08:50 PM   #2
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Old 06-09-05, 01:54 PM   #3
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this was a nice little drop.....a little simple tho....i felt it lacked depth, so work on that by maybe coming more complex wit your vocab....and adding more emotion to your verse....keep doing it.......
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