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Old 06-10-05, 01:32 PM   #1
King Solo
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MaRVJay1009 vs King Solo

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No Recycling
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No Hate
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3-0 = KO!!!

its tha rematch kid, gud luck

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Old 06-10-05, 01:49 PM   #2
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Old 06-10-05, 01:51 PM   #3
MaRVJay
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whut girl in her rite mind would marry dis cat,dat cant actually rap.
solo dumb he thought puttin "money on a fitted" was a "salary-CaP".
nun of ya battles got me browsin,ova 50 wins datz whut got me wildin.
ppl me ask me is solo "iLL" & i said "Na-Na" like "foxxy's album".
if u lost ya mind yet ya gonna lose it,face it u wasn't born 4 music.
ya audio's a be borin stupid,solo's CD im really lookin (fast) FOWaRD 2 it.
solo's a kid aint a part of em grown,gota alot of hate 4 marv in his bones.
u aint a "king" ima call u "PRiNCE" cuzz u'll always be da "artist unknown".*
u got da ryhme scheme of a kid whut user 2 ur gay bar's do please.
cant cum up with nothin new he stay on "writer's-block" like "jr-groupies".**

*ya'll all know prince da singer well he used da call his self da artist unknown

**jr writer is da dude down with dip set...if ur not dumb u'll get a punch
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^^he's scared.lol
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Old 06-10-05, 01:52 PM   #4
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Old 06-10-05, 02:13 PM   #5
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Skillz are lackin son…like tha flag in ya sig man this star is all faded..
I mean on a scale of 1-to-10…wait, looks like “zero” never made it..
Like ‘homicide party games’ this bitch gets murdered just for fun..
But half ya quote is right…when shit jumps off the ‘Queenz Bitches Run’.. *
Being ‘under’-‘dogs’ gets you on top, Marv’s motto to get to 1st place..
Well………I guess that explains why Marv lets his mom sit on his face..
Ya keep spoutin off dumb shit, ya gone end up a mental home resident..
Like ‘Queenz Run Shit!’..and here I thought the US was run by a President..
Contradiction of yaself..whilst ya ego is large ya skillz are more atomic.. *
Marv’ll kill me..ya can’t spit, so what ya gone beat me wit an X-men comic..
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* I substituted “niggaz” for “bitches” cuz I don’t want none of this “you being racist crap”.
** a definition of atomic = immeasurably small.
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Old 06-10-05, 02:47 PM   #6
MaRVJay
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnn
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^^he's scared.lol
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Old 06-10-05, 03:08 PM   #7
AckRite
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Voted For: King Solo

whut girl in her rite mind would marry dis cat,dat cant actually rap.
solo dumb he thought puttin "money on a fitted" was a "salary-CaP".
7/10....Nice Punch
nun of ya battles got me browsin,ova 50 wins datz whut got me wildin.
ppl me ask me is solo "iLL" & i said "Na-Na" like "foxxy's album".
6/10...Nice Twist Wasnt Hard Tho
if u lost ya mind yet ya gonna lose it,face it u wasn't born 4 music.
ya audio's a be borin stupid,solo's CD im really lookin (fast) FOWaRD 2 it.
6.5/10...At 1st I Got Lost Cuz Da (fast) Part In Front Of It...But I Get You
solo's a kid aint a part of em grown,gota alot of hate 4 marv in his bones.
u aint a "king" ima call u "PRiNCE" cuzz u'll always be da "artist unknown".
7.5/10...Lol Nice 2nd Line, 1st One Was EH
u got da ryhme scheme of a kid whut user 2 ur gay bar's do please.
cant cum up with nothin new he stay on "writer's-block" like "jr-groupies".
6.5/10...2nd Line Coulda Been Worded Betta 4 Effect, But Nice Ne Way

Ya Punches Were On Point Some Coulda Had More Force If You Worded Em Properly...Or Betta...But 4 Tha Most Part Ya Wordplay/Punchlines Were Tight


Skillz are lackin son…like tha flag in ya sig man this star is all faded..
I mean on a scale of 1-to-10…wait, looks like “zero” never made it..
8.5/10...Nice Twist On That, Creative
Like ‘homicide party games’ this bitch gets murdered just for fun..
But half ya quote is right…when shit jumps off the ‘Queenz Bitches Run’.. *
6.5/10...Nothin 2 Serious Nice Hit Tho
Being ‘under’-‘dogs’ gets you on top, Marv’s motto to get to 1st place..
Well………I guess that explains why Marv lets his mom sit on his face..
7.5/10...Nice Shit, Both Lines On Point
Ya keep spoutin off dumb shit, ya gone end up a mental home resident..
Like ‘Queenz Run Shit!’..and here I thought the US was run by a President..
9/10...LOL Da Set Up Was Tight, Punch Even Betta
Contradiction of yaself..whilst ya ego is large ya skillz are more atomic.. *
Marv’ll kill me..ya can’t spit, so what ya gone beat me wit an X-men comic..
10/10...Tight Ass Closer...Serious

Ya Verse Had Most Cats Such As: Punches, Wordplay, Creativity (This Cat You Had Down Packed...Real Nice Concepts Nothin Played), Personals On His Home Town Of Queens....All Lines Were On Point, Set Up Was Good Also

Punches: Marv
Personals: Solo
Creativity: Solo
Wordplay: Tie
Multiples: Marv
Structure: Solo (By A Lil Bit)
Overall Vote: King Solo

Tight Ass Battle...I Thought Marv Had It Until I Read Solo's Verse...Honest Shit

RTF...Whicheva Link Wit My Name On It You Find...Hit It Up

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Old 06-10-05, 04:37 PM   #8
M&rk
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Voted For: King Solo

marv-
whut girl in her rite mind would marry dis cat,dat cant actually rap.
solo dumb he thought puttin "money on a fitted" was a "salary-CaP".
^^dope but callin someone dumb isn't a hard hitting concept and thats a made up personal... good creativity though, but that aint really a punch
^^^ i thought all your punches were kinda like that except...
solo's a kid aint a part of em grown,gota alot of hate 4 marv in his bones.
u aint a "king" ima call u "PRiNCE" cuzz u'll always be da "artist unknown".*
^^^ this was your best 'punch' u actaully aimed it as a punch... if u woulda rewarded your creative lines into punches it woulda been a dope battle verse, but its just a creative drop istead...

solo-
Skillz are lackin son…like tha flag in ya sig man this star is all faded..
I mean on a scale of 1-to-10…wait, looks like “zero” never made it..
Like ‘homicide party games’ this bitch gets murdered just for fun..
But half ya quote is right…when shit jumps off the ‘Queenz Bitches Run’..
^^^ablsolute dope shit... see these are worded as punches and are makin fun of marv while being creative...
.... the rest of your verse i thought was like marv's though and u didn't really have punches just creative talk...
overal: vote here cuz he had two bars i though were actual hard hitting punches instead of just one.
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Old 06-10-05, 04:46 PM   #9
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why didnt you vote......one more vote and i win.....


go vote on one of my other battles..........WERD
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Old 06-11-05, 04:34 AM   #10
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.................uppin this shit...................
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Old 06-11-05, 07:48 AM   #11
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Voted For: King Solo

whut girl in her rite mind would marry dis cat,dat cant actually rap.
solo dumb he thought puttin "money on a fitted" was a "salary-CaP".
^wuznt feelin da opener, pretty basic 4 a mc ov ur level

nun of ya battles got me browsin,ova 50 wins datz whut got me wildin.
ppl me ask me is solo "iLL" & i said "Na-Na" like "foxxy's album".
^decent concept dawg

if u lost ya mind yet ya gonna lose it,face it u wasn't born 4 music.
ya audio's a be borin stupid,solo's CD im really lookin (fast) FOWaRD 2 it.
^not feeling it, wording ov da lines wuz weak

solo's a kid aint a part of em grown,gota alot of hate 4 marv in his bones.
u aint a "king" ima call u "PRiNCE" cuzz u'll always be da "artist unknown".*
^i aint mad @ dat, datz hot

u got da ryhme scheme of a kid whut user 2 ur gay bar's do please.
cant cum up with nothin new he stay on "writer's-block" like "jr-groupies".**
^first line wuz wack but da 2nd wuz fyre

Decent verse marvjay, few linez let u down, it aint da best i saw frum u but it wuz iight dont get me wrong. a lil inconsistant wit ya punches datz why my vote goes 2 king solo, good job though dawg


Skillz are lackin son…like tha flag in ya sig man this star is all faded..
I mean on a scale of 1-to-10…wait, looks like “zero” never made it..
^Ok hit. playin off da signature i aint mad @ dat yo

Like ‘homicide party games’ this bitch gets murdered just for fun..
But half ya quote is right…when shit jumps off the ‘Queenz Bitches Run’..
^Good first line, 2nd line wuz da weakest line in yo verse.

Being ‘under’-‘dogs’ gets you on top, Marv’s motto to get to 1st place..
Well………I guess that explains why Marv lets his mom sit on his face..
^momma lines iz usually played but u used da concept 2 good effect

Ya keep spoutin off dumb shit, ya gone end up a mental home resident..
Like ‘Queenz Run Shit!’..and here I thought the US was run by a President..
^datz real nyce personal, im frum Cali so i totally agree good pun

Contradiction of yaself..whilst ya ego is large ya skillz are more atomic.. *
Marv’ll kill me..ya can’t spit, so what ya gone beat me wit an X-men comic..
^nyce creative wordplay off da name, good clozer dawg


Syck verse, yall 2 both had good wordplay. king solo had da more consistantly dropping punchlinez. if marv wuld ov dropped a few better personalz he wuld ov had da win. but he didnt so mah vote goes 2 da morwe constistant wit da punches king solo
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