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Check in by: 06-15-05 at 04:46 PM

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§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 04:40 PM.

Affliction has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 04:40 PM.

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Bump.............................................. ..

i fucked up........lol


threaten to pull tha semi?....plz homie, kid ya dick in ya pants!!!!

...is suppose to be...

threaten to pull tha semi?....plz homie, keep ya dick in ya pants!!!!


w.e. vote up

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It's all good though....Nice verse though...............

Voted For: §ick§eed

if affliction cant out "weigh bread" how tha fucks he liftin toast?
left poetic scriptures cuz ya "untitled" thread fucked up da post

Ight

please you ain hardcore, RapVerse got a real bitch on its hands
threaten to pull tha semi?....plz homie, kid ya dick in ya pants!!!!

Lol ight

fear instilled in you, who really wants a loser in the best crew?
ur house has no numbers, y?...no one wants to ADDRESS you!!!

Tight

you aint on my level afflict, i'm on a cliff literally starin over yall
flictions a gangsta!, he [i]stay strapped[i]..on his farm wearin overalls

Safe

in front lines u lack skills, dont dq votes...everyone'll vote fairly
strobe add 0-2 to his record......since gettin KO'D is his "theory"

Tight sorta

VS

Damn, without Hotness and flow you still haven't elevated*
Your punches are weak and small, like your name stated*

Ok nameplay

Your punches are "haze" like juelz santana in your sig*
Have you so scared that you won't flick me back ya dig?*

Ok

Ya from the New York city the uptown? Your skillz are negative
And I'll make you so close to your str by
................................taking the 1..Damn I'm so creative*

Weak

By the time this battle is over so is your sickness man*
I'm the damn tylenol, i'm so above of you right now
.............you can catch me on the top shelf in publix fam

Weak

You can get locked up by still won have "steel bars"
Your punches are so out-dated like the played start wars

Ok

Punches= Sick
Personals = Aff werent good though
flow - sick
creativity - sick
opener - sick
closer - sick

overall - sick


return favcour please or thisl be removed sorry but that just how its nah mean?

EZ

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Voted For: §ick§eed

if affliction cant out "weigh bread" how tha fucks he liftin toast?
left poetic scriptures cuz ya "untitled" thread fucked up da post
^^good
please you ain hardcore, RapVerse got a real bitch on its hands
threaten to pull tha semi?....plz homie, kid ya dick in ya pants!!!!
^^ahh...kinda weak
fear instilled in you, who really wants a loser in the best crew?
ur house has no numbers, y?...no one wants to ADDRESS you!!!
^^Nice
you aint on my level afflict, i'm on a cliff literally starin over yall
flictions a gangsta!, he [i]stay strapped[i]..on his farm wearin overalls
^^weak
in front lines u lack skills, dont dq votes...everyone'll vote fairly
strobe add 0-2 to his record......since gettin KO'D is his "theory"
^^Ok

This was a good verse but some punches were weak.I like the fact ya had a lot a personals in it.


Damn, without Hotness and flow you still haven't elevated*
Your punches are weak and small, like your name stated*
^^weak
Your punches are "haze" like juelz santana in your sig*
Have you so scared that you won't flick me back ya dig?*
^^nah..weak
Ya from the New York city the uptown? Your skillz are negative
And I'll make you so close to your str by
................................taking the 1..Damn I'm so creative*
^^weak
By the time this battle is over so is your sickness man*
I'm the damn tylenol, i'm so above of you right now
^^nah
.............you can catch me on the top shelf in publix fam
You can get locked up by still won have "steel bars"
Played
Your punches are so out-dated like the played start wars
^^finish tha bar?

Ur verse was weak.U gotta work on ur punches.Speccially on ripping someone's name

Vote-SickSeed(return the favor in the link)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851
^^^vote in my battle

aiite dunn i got u today lol i been gone namean...uppin!!!

(good battle afflict)

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uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin..............................

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Voted For: §ick§eed

SickSeed had a betta verse den affliction mostly cus of punches it was very creative yo structure was good so it adds to your win you had nice personals in there which is always a plus good battle from both

return the favor or i will have vote removed links in sig

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aiite sexi i got u ma...........imma check ya shit when i get back forreal no worries UPPIN

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