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Old 06-07-05, 07:06 PM   #1
Chris Stylez
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Young Dollar Freestyle

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This was a straight freestyle on a mic at a party dis weekend N i just got a tape of it N wrote my freestyle down after listening to it like 100 times. Niggas at my school said it was hot so i just decided to test it on RV n make a OM's. Oh yeah N i dont freestyle dat much



I hang wit real G's wit black Tee's on Da block............
Got rocks in my sock N glocks in a stashspot............
Whitegold ice out N hoes is what my cashgot.............
Nigga quit talkin N Muggin like ya blast shots..............
Im lyricaly bound wit a 4pound ready to impound..........
2 the next nigga who wishes to simply speedbye............
Wavin Fake gang signs like he simply wavin hi..............
You smokin less than your wack shit freestyle hype.......
But i'll burn ya ass up N battles till ya wesly snipes......
Quit uppin ya shirt before i leave ya wit invisble glands......
Dissapear you from ya block like you the invisible man.......
If yeen aint know that i slang dope man..............................
Dat powder in ya girls make-up kit...dats dat coke man.......
You think cuz i drop dro dimes da shit gon cost me.............
I slang so much snow,that I catch restrainin orders from frosty
I rock big coats in da summer cuz my neck cold.................
Dame ice....gotta wear heat pads cuz my neck froze............
Why talk shit when you know you need to quit frontin...........
I have to shoot a nigga's legs off jus so he'll quit runnin..........
I got the word on the streets chillin up in da suburban............
Like a pastor wit da word to teach in a church sermon...........
N im about to past da mic to my nigga dodge.......................
So niggas can do G shit while they livin in they mirage.............


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2200929


^^^ link to another OM
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Old 06-07-05, 07:09 PM   #2
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i should of called dis freestyle power of da dro........two damn burned up on dis one
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Old 06-09-05, 12:02 AM   #3
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ayo somebody give me some feed back on dis
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Old 06-09-05, 12:10 AM   #4
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not bad for freestyle......

just droppin ya shit....

vocabs could be a little more complex though.....
it seemed kinda basic...

structure was tight.....
flow went well throughout.....

overall......6.5/10

RTF!!! my latest OM............."Basic Self-Glorifying Playedness!!!"
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Old 06-09-05, 12:15 AM   #5
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gotcha preciate da feedback...........should of drop dis on audio but i dont know how.....how about the next feedback hook a nigga up wit dat info
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Old 06-09-05, 01:30 AM   #6
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It was a pretty good freestyle I liked the flow and the structure was good u could up your vocab but it was tight
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Old 06-09-05, 10:46 AM   #7
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hehe "restrain orders from frosty" aint that some shit. i like this one man u got some skills, tight for tha freestyle. should post more a ya stuff
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Old 06-10-05, 12:15 AM   #8
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aiight aiight im likin dis
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Old 06-14-05, 07:02 PM   #9
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anybody else peepin???...................
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