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06-17-05, 02:44 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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The Culture of Hip-Hop
IP: 3A45 611B
In A World, Where Misguidance Is Often Confused With The Curious Minded.. People Who Don't Understand Truth From Reality, Ignorance Thats Blinded.. They Pretend To Comprehend Like They've Been In Those Situations Before.. Except When Fantasy Becomes Reality They're Outlined In Chalk On The Floor.. This Is The War Rappers Face In This World of Misunderstood Perpetual Lyrics.. From Those Who Described Their Life-Lines Through Their Intellectual Spirits.. The Evolution of Verbal Expression With Felt Passion Like Parental Aggression.. The Founders From Run DMC to Richard Pryor With Their Cultural Impressions.. In Present The Legacy Is Carried Forth From Mos Def To Talib Kweli and Nas.. So We Pause This Liberal Art In Its Tracks To Porportion Inspirational Stars.. Started As The Black-Mans Way To Protest In Forms Of Unknown Verbal Slurs.. But Eventaully Evolved Into A Nation-Wide Movement Where Controversy Occured.. Varieties Of Expressions Steming From Lifes Struggles To Police Brutality.. And Hip-Hop Hit An All Time Bottom When Gang-Banging Became It's Reality.. The Mentality of These Artists To Posion Our Youth With Death Increments.. To Hate One Another Because Of Color When Really..What Is The Diffrence.. That I Ask... So With These Past Incidents Leaving Our Communities In Vast Imprisionments.. What Kind of Future Does This Hold In Hand..Can You Suggest The Predicuments.. From Its' Fallen Soilder's and Leader's In This Movement of Hip-Hop Culture.. The Industry Feeds Off Us Until Our Death Like A Crew of Egyptian Vultures.. But Still With The Presence of Past Emcees We Progress With Our Rap Dreams.. Until The Industry Sufficates Us Into A Paralell Abyss Like The Black Sea.. To Make It Clearer I'll Polish and Present This Mirror Which Holds True.. That Only You Can Shape Your Destiny Some From Here Out Its All On You.. With That Said Please Take A Moment For You To Just Think..Ok Now Stop.. Now Help Progress Rap and Present Your Mind To The Culture of Hip-Hop.. ~R~ |
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06-17-05, 06:34 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
this was good, interesting, quick paced read....im feeling this would make a sweet song, if you found a solid beat, nah mean?
i liked the first verse, how you broke everything down and really contrasted reality with fantasy...it worked nice, and how you incorporated it with hip hop, word second verse, it was good, the mirror line was fire....yeah, so overall, i was feelin' this for sure, keep up yo
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06-17-05, 06:51 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6541 F99E
Ur flow sucked homie
And the content was a bit bland in my opinion.Ur a really good battler.......but this shit shows ya need help in topicals. |
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06-17-05, 07:07 PM
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Champion
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IP: 7A4A D46A
yea get a solid beat and you would be rockin this shit hard on audio......i was feelin this mos definitely....RTF....link in sig its called - BATTLEFIELD SCARS
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