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Old 06-21-05, 06:51 PM   #1
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turtle race

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i run faster
i run run run
i lrun faster
tutrtle run run

when i was 3 i called a turtle
the trutles last name is purple
fuck you, fuck turles
why i was called a turtle
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Old 06-21-05, 06:56 PM   #2
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dope, nice emotions, nice structure, nice vocab nice everything man 10/10
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Old 06-21-05, 06:58 PM   #3
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man I love you

you is the onlly one with humor around here
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Old 06-21-05, 11:52 PM   #4
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wtf is this?.......................... LOL

it made me lough as hell
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Old 06-22-05, 04:33 AM   #5
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wordplay was good, and i liked the fast flowing structure of this piece.
Keep it up.lol
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